Cool story bro

I love it. The era, the ships, the tactics, all of it. Very interested in this story

Hhhhh. Update when, man?

this is interesting... I can't say anything else yet cause it is the first chapter but i have to ask you how many faction/fiefdoms do you intend to have in the Star Wars side cause in the Star Wars universe/lore no one actually knows how many planets/cultures/species are there cause they just make up all of that stuff up when they need to for the plot Ps. I hope that you will update this soon :)

Cool story.

Just started reading, I like the spirit of destiny bet. There a rough time for the next update?

I don't particularily like your purposeful nerf of SW weaponry, but I think it was necessary in order for the approach to tge story you're going for. It makes sense that a galaxy that's pretty much had constant wars for over 25,000 years would have developed ridiculously powerful weapons, it doesn't really make sense for this version of the Empire though. Other than that, I think it seems pretty interesting and well written.

It is good.

I liked the ships being used and the way the were portrayed.

The amount of resources stated. There is enough resources in 1 solar system to provide a means of habitats for 30 Quadrillion Humans on the real low side of things. The people problem that was described can be taken care of through 3 methods:

1. Instigate a 8 child policy per family.

2. Grow clones en mass.

3. Droids. Making lots of droids with smarter programming for specific roles.

The other thing is the turbo lasers should be creating Nuclear explosion level effects, and that means would not be able to fire fast. The laser should create at least the order of 300 Kilotons worth of TNT should be able to fire 1 round every 5-10 seconds. The pilot lasers should be capable of doing 1 Kiloton of TNT, and that with 2 rounds every second or 2.

I loved the world building just below the surface, hopefully that gets elaborated on in future chapters. I also love the use of Imperial Remnants, rather than a unified Galactic Empire. The story was well written, good level of detail and sharp pacing. Basically no complaints, honestly. Just hope more comes soon.

yes I liked the chapter the battle was vary star wars with no overpowering of the empire or HFY. At what point does this take place I think that it may take place around the warlords age am I right before the reborn emperor but after the rebels take Coruscant will you make this into a full FanFiction. something about the start you said somethin about the gifted, force users or under cover jedi? I liked that you didn't us wolf pack for the citadel fleet most writers get that wrong giving the aliens hours days wolf packs thing that are human. thank you pleas more

This is certainly a fun idea. The swapping perspectives was well executed and kept the chapter's pace from stagnating during the logistics sections. The idea of having first contact boil down to miscommunications has been done before, but you executed on the concept originally enough to make the 'exchange' interesting. Overall, I enjoyed it. First chapters are meant to serve as a hook, and this one does it's job.

At least your trying to create a math different from humans, afterall these are aliens and their time and math would be different.

very good beginning for the story , i do wonder when humanity from mass Effect will make contact with the remant empire , and maybe becoming very good friends and Allies , can hardlly wait for the next chapters .