Great story! One of my favorites! Please update as soon as you can!

please update

I caught up, but now what? Most well written stories I've found so far are recent and have to wait for updates. Oh well. The saying for video games could be said about fanfiction too.

A great start! I'm eager tto see what happens next!

I really like how you present the grow of ash and serena's relationship. neither do I love the drama but in a relationship jealousy and arguments normally happens so there is always a little bit. About the "make out"... if they are a couple they do it even if I like the fluff as well.
I read that you wanted to write other 3 stories about this, do you intend to do it even now?
Btw, I really like this story so I am waiting to read more chapter and see how it ends. Good luck, and I hope you haven't forgotten about it

The “m’lady’” and the forehead touching was super out of left field, but I still found the reunion cute, so I can overlook it haha

One thing I love skillet, and also this is a pretty good story you have made a pretty good evil team for a bunch of OCs and I love your choice of allowing Ash to switch Pokemon but I do wish you could have made the battle longer so we could see more of Ash's Pokemon in action or more of Zinnia's. By the way I agree that Zinnia as well as other alpha sapphire and omega ruby characters should have been added to the anime. Despite you getting a lot of Poke science wrong (which is hard to do any way much less make into a good story) you have made quite the amazing fanfic.

You actually did quite a good job on your contest ideas it was easy to imagine and picture but I love your idea to get this as close to the anime as possible. Even rereading it, it is still an amazing piece of work, thank you so much for working on it.

I love this. Please update soon.

Hell yes! I love this chapter.
Dawn has a bit of an attitude in this, and I'm loving it. Bitches didn't move out the way of Mamoswine, so he made them bitches get out the way. xD

I'm really hoping that Lillie and Zorua fight someone with a Psychic type Pokémon, maybe that Commander Chi guy who Ash called 'purple dude'. I'm pretty sure he had a Metagross, that could be an interesting match up. I also really want Kiawe to go wild and blow something up; not the base they're all in, that would be bad.

Keep up the amazing work and please be safe. Remember to (Insert proper hygiene guide here) and be as safe as you can be. Good luck mate! :)

YES! Finally! I've been dying to read this. If there r going to be seventeen chapters, I hope that the next five chapters won't have entirely just fighting Team Sigma but have room in the end for better stuff like, Ash n Serena at last on a date! Team Sigma r complete fools. What they're doing is just as dumb as trying to pet a feral tiger not in a cage. Just hurry up n give them their self destrution. Update soon.

Speaking of the Aura One...

Wow I am glad they got the orbs away of those guys and I hope they can stop them for good

I read this a while back and I thought it was good
I come back and it's better
Love your idea with songs

pleaseeeeee update i need to see the ending!