For chapter 9 - excellent, the wicked witch of the west is gone! Banished! But ... banixhed to where? I wish it had been made clear. Darcy, by virtue of being Anne de Bourgh''s widower, owns Rosings now, doesn't he? He should sell that one to bring back money to the Pemberley estates. Besides, Rosings will now hold even more bitter memories. Sell Rosings, I say!

This story was like a cookie, short, sweet and satisfying. Thank you.

i like this story how they got closer, how she did like to do with her time and her finding out who he is in the night when he trys to help the poor or in nee of help_but did they put the aunt to jail or better the working house, to pay of what she did take at Money and items?

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Thank you for a very fun story. I liked that it had some elements at the start of a story I am writing, but then it took a very different turn. I've always wondered about doing a variety of crossover with Darcy and Zorro. I think you managed it very well.

No trouble suspending disbelief for a bit of fun like this

This sounds like a fun story so far!

This was an excellent story with an interesting premise. Thank you for sharing it, and I cannot wait for your future projects!

A refreshing AU with a lot of heart.
Thanks for sharing your time and talent.

This story is amazing!

This was SO fun. If the urge to write a couple of their adventures ever strikes you, know you'll have a thrilled audience. Thank you, as always, for an original story that was a pleasure to read.

This is an amazing story and such a novel idea, it’s unusual for Darcy to marry anyone first but I liked it! I love your writing and eagerly await more stories

Ch 4 was masterful, watching their “real” selves fall in love during the night in a fantasy world, while their fake selves are so miserable during the daytime real world.

This was a very enjoyable story! It was quite different to other P&P fics, and almost had a Robin Hood vibe going on (and as a fan of Robin Hood, that is great!).
I am curious about the original story you mentioned as the basis for this version. Do you remember what it is called? I would very much like to read it!

Loved this whimsical story.