Amazing Story! :)

I finished this story a week ago and I absolutely loved it.
I really enjoyed the various settings. We never felt stuck in one place, it all flowed along quite nicely. The characters were developed beyond their canon selves quite well, I enjoyed the romance between Percy and Reyna. Overall this was quite well written. I honestly want another 500k words of this. We get really invested in the story and the characters and I enjoyed all of it. Thanks for writing this story.

Good Chapter.

After all the Percy POVs I was caught off by the beginning, but this was an interesting read. You did a good job capturing these two and how it progressed through time especially Titus' feelings for his friend. You put a compelling backstory behind two people that were just names without faces or depth before this chapter. Nicely done.

Back to reading,

-Spectre4hire

I'm glad I stumbled onto this story.

You're telling a unique tale and I'm interested in seeing where it leads especially with the pairing being tagged what it is. Since that was how I found this story. Their scene together in this chapter exploring the area was great.

Percy's doing a decent job trying to adjust to his new life as a Roman. Good to see him and Jason training and possibly becoming friends.

Thanks for the time and energy you've put into this,

-Spectre4hire

I honestly don't have any final thoughts to add, I've already stated anything like that in previous reviews. Can't wait for this future project. (I haven't checked your profile yet to see if you've posted a prologue yet.)

I really like how this story ended. Its a great Percy Jackson story. Enjoyed this fanfic a lot.

Hey it’s me, but I’m on my phone. Thank you for letting me follow this awesome journey with u

Neat

When it takes only one year to complete such a great fanfic, Props to you (wo? correct me if I'm wrong) man

Hey pterygio
Is it ok if I post this story on wattpad in your name?
If youwould allow that I would say that this story is yours and yada yada
If you don’t want that or it’s ok with you please pm me
( acc Yesse2362)

Thank yo for keep updating bro

G.. Greek Empire? WTF.

I got an update notification, did you rewrite or cleanup a chapter?

Nice that you’re still updating... I’m sorry that I’m only a guest so i can’t vote for this story or sth like that... but it’s really awesome(Apollo speaking here)
Cheers
Yesse2362

Man, I'm not sure I can even say this story ended on a happy ending, Percy and Reyna had a rather was ending with Reyna dying before they could really spend much time together, Jason died, Jason's daughter had to kill her love and had an unhappy childhood.

Why is everyone making their stories so depressing.