why the fuck did you make momo not the class president and so whine?!

mineta is not funny or creative and it makes you laugh because you are to stupid to understand why. other then that good chapter

Not worth reading.

I have to comment on how much of a great job you are doing. I finished bleach a while ago but haven't started My Hero yet, however here I am addicted to this story.

Drat, we haven't even seen Izumi be Yoruichi's student yet. That felt like a good idea to me, are you keeping that plot point?

Ok. I tried to read this through but with how much everything seemed to be roughly the same with a sprinkling of Ichigo added I just couldn't keep reading in good conscience without letting you know that the writing is flawed.

The story itself hardly seems original, but that's to be expected with most crossover stories, but this seems to be taken to another level. The story is exactly how it would go in the anime, even the breaks are the same. When writing a fanfiction, you dont want to copy the source material's exact plot, which is why people normally introduce OCs, crossovers, AUs, or a situation that changes the entire outcome of something that leads into entirely different somethings, deviating from the original timeline. In this fanfiction, nothing of that sort beside adding Ichigo and genderbending Deku and Shouto was done.

While those would warrant an interesting tidbit on their own and would make an interesting story (which is why I have a story of femdeku favorited, even if it isnt that good), the way you made it just seems dull. This fic doesnt read well because it's trying to be an anime- the random cuts and the way it doesn't focus on its main character at all makes for a very uninteresting storyline and unengaging cast. The romance and attraction you tried to sprinkle in seemed out of place and the overall effect of Ichigo on the world itself is practically non existent.

To summarize, the story has an interesting idea, but the way it is executed is quite dull. I don't recommend this story to most readers, but I'm not gonna stop you from trying.

Sorry about this rant, author.

hmm the Final felt a bit unsatisfiying but i think that was the point todoroki still noch completly willing to use her flames wouldnt have a great chance. i think a fight between them would have been a great time to present Ichigos Bankai to the world so i look forward how and when u want to use it. otherwise nice chapter if u have the muse do some R&R chapter/s before u press on with the canon story maybe some progress on the realationships of Ichigo? Maybe some original arc where he and 1-A have to confront his "Hollow"? just to give u some ideas. wether or not u wanted to include Momo in the Harem i would like to sugest 1 nother do it how u want but i would find it nice to read i mean either Mei or Kyouka preferly Kyouka.

More words and still small meaning still liking ur work and looking forward to the next chapter. :)

well well i read all now in one sitting and must say its actually quite good that story of yours .
For the Harem if u dont have a to good Reason i think Momo would be nice to see in that dynamic.
at first i felt that u just going down the plot from canon without making too much difference i am pleasentry suprised that it seems ur doing more changes is time comes thats good and i would be happy if u got more bold in that regard. Some Minus points in my Opinion where only in the beginning of the fic meaning the difficutly to read the text but that changed for the better to so long text small meaning good work and i hope to read more soon. :)

The fact that you're mixing all your dialogue into a mishmash of single paragraphs makes it impossible to tell who's speaking. The summary made me want to read this story quite a great deal, but I find that with this kind of major error, it's unreadable. Perhaps I can give it a try when you have your story beta'd, proofread, and corrected.

Ichigo is so weak, I started reading the story think I wil read a awesome ichigo but he is only a pussy don't do things right when needed(have to depend 2times in his other half) and even lost to katsuki. He train all his life to be this shit ?

Isn't the story the same as the cannon? I don't see differences in the plot

Since season 4 just came out i was rereading this and i got rellay excited when you updated

Just commenting on something but maybe shouts hair should be shorter. Maybe it's just me but I think having a gender bent charecter have really long hair is overused. Granted slightly longer hair would fit female izuku but not shouto. I think female shouto looks better with a hairstyle like jiro' some. But hey that's just my opinion. You do what you want for your story. Keep up the good work.

I personally feel that making her a bunny girl may have been better suited to Midoriyas future fighting style. Since even in the original, once he started to his legs especially, did he focus on more about mobility and kicks for his style. His costume also reminded me of a rabbit, even when it was suppose to resemble all might. But I still like the chapter nonetheless.

Thanks