but howwwww

gilderoy fuckin lockhart
why am i not surprised

its a good thing harry knew beck was suspicious

i wonder if thats malfoy and i hope not

beck is a wizard? i dont know what to think about that but atleast harry will finally meet peter!

how does he know harry?!

This is so interesting! Cant wait to read more of it!

It’s a great story and please continue the story

Wait...I thought Lockhart got hit with a memory charm...Did I miss something? Also, everyone knows that Tony died, how are they gonna convince them he’s back? And where da heck did they get the hair sample?! Tony was cremated, so no hair remained...All that was left was that arc reactor he made to keep himself alive, floating away on a wreath, with the words ‘Proof Tony Stark has a heart’ *sniff sniff*

You have great dialogue but it comes out flat.
All you put is “quote.” He replied.
You have to add movement to your characters. The way you write makes the characters almost bodiless. If you want any sentence examples I’ll be more than happy to send you some! But this is still really good.

Tankds for t hr chapt

I actually do not like the breaking of the fourth wall...Wade just gets on my nerves. Just throw some chimichangas in a microwave and then that in a cage...Wade will follow.

Please do not use Deadpool and/or Future!Harry as narrators again

Harry Potter AND Spiderman in the same multiverse?! WHHAAAAATTTTT!
And as for the fake Quentin, I don’t know...maybe DRACO MALFOY?! THE KID WHO HAS HATED HARRY FOR YEARS?! thought he would’ve forgotten about Harry by now...(or, wouldn’t care..)
You did a great job with the crossover, and I can’t wait until the next chapter!

Yo creo que es: Lockhart
Ya quiero ver que rumbo tomará tu historia. Ahora Peter no tiene a EDITH y bueno, Harry parece estar a la vanguardia, lo normal para un veterano.

Looking forward to the next one. Thank you!