Reviews for THE TURNING OF WHEELS
ThunderSphinx chapter 13 . 6/13
Sansa and Tyrion? Disgusting. He's way older than her, time travel or not.
ThunderSphinx chapter 12 . 6/13
Since Rhaegar and Lyanna were married whilst Aerys and Joanna were not, Jon's claim is stronger.
Few things chapter 15 . 7/28/2019
Lord commander of the nights watch is named Jeor Mormont- Jorah is the name of his son who is in Essos with Danaerys

King Robert Baratheon called himself Robert Targaryen in a paragraph above
Annon chapter 12 . 7/7/2019
Seriously? They're secretly targaryans? That's a plot twist that doesn't make sense. Joffry wouldn't have any claim to the throne either because his illegitimate so that revelation was stupid. The writing was better than most but story was lame
carlys.love chapter 29 . 7/5/2019
Beautifull, thank you i like a history.
DarylDixon'sLover chapter 29 . 7/5/2019
Great chapter
NiteDragon91 chapter 28 . 7/4/2019
That was a sudden end to the story. Almost too sudden. Good fic though, next time try to extend your chapters a little and slow things down.
DarkFireCat5241999 chapter 27 . 7/3/2019
Can't they just use arya to kill the night king again
DarylDixon'sLover chapter 28 . 7/3/2019
Uh oh
PepperMorganStark chapter 27 . 7/3/2019
I'm sorry, but since what happened with Sansa I can't read this story anymore.
a rape victim would never want to have sex with her rapist. In fact, these victims have trouble to building new relationships. This is something very delicate and serious, so it needs to be treated with a lot of respect.
Guest chapter 27 . 7/2/2019
I hope petyr baelish won't escape
But I feel he will
Maybe to essos
Dzerx chapter 27 . 7/2/2019
Awesome! Go Jon!
Lovefaery chapter 1 . 7/2/2019
“a title to which she had no rights to - either by blood or by conquest.“
Technically if her ancestor Torrhen Stark was king of the north hundreds of years ago, wouldn’t that give her a blood right?
Anime Princess chapter 27 . 7/2/2019
Great that the Fates are making things hard and yet moving in the Starks/Targaryen forces into a position of power! By the way, WHY hasn’t Stannis sent word about how Baelish murdered his brother the King and how the King symbolically bent the knee to Aegon/Jon.
DarylDixon'sLover chapter 27 . 7/2/2019
Uh oh
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