Reviews for THE TURNING OF WHEELS |
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ThunderSphinx chapter 13 . 6/13 Sansa and Tyrion? Disgusting. He's way older than her, time travel or not. |
ThunderSphinx chapter 12 . 6/13 Since Rhaegar and Lyanna were married whilst Aerys and Joanna were not, Jon's claim is stronger. |
Few things chapter 15 . 7/28/2019 Lord commander of the nights watch is named Jeor Mormont- Jorah is the name of his son who is in Essos with Danaerys King Robert Baratheon called himself Robert Targaryen in a paragraph above |
Annon chapter 12 . 7/7/2019 Seriously? They're secretly targaryans? That's a plot twist that doesn't make sense. Joffry wouldn't have any claim to the throne either because his illegitimate so that revelation was stupid. The writing was better than most but story was lame |
carlys.love chapter 29 . 7/5/2019 Beautifull, thank you i like a history. |
DarylDixon'sLover chapter 29 . 7/5/2019 Great chapter |
NiteDragon91 chapter 28 . 7/4/2019 That was a sudden end to the story. Almost too sudden. Good fic though, next time try to extend your chapters a little and slow things down. |
DarkFireCat5241999 chapter 27 . 7/3/2019 Can't they just use arya to kill the night king again |
DarylDixon'sLover chapter 28 . 7/3/2019 Uh oh |
PepperMorganStark chapter 27 . 7/3/2019 I'm sorry, but since what happened with Sansa I can't read this story anymore. a rape victim would never want to have sex with her rapist. In fact, these victims have trouble to building new relationships. This is something very delicate and serious, so it needs to be treated with a lot of respect. |
Guest chapter 27 . 7/2/2019 I hope petyr baelish won't escape But I feel he will Maybe to essos |
Dzerx chapter 27 . 7/2/2019 Awesome! Go Jon! |
Lovefaery chapter 1 . 7/2/2019 “a title to which she had no rights to - either by blood or by conquest.“ Technically if her ancestor Torrhen Stark was king of the north hundreds of years ago, wouldn’t that give her a blood right? |
Anime Princess chapter 27 . 7/2/2019 Great that the Fates are making things hard and yet moving in the Starks/Targaryen forces into a position of power! By the way, WHY hasn’t Stannis sent word about how Baelish murdered his brother the King and how the King symbolically bent the knee to Aegon/Jon. |
DarylDixon'sLover chapter 27 . 7/2/2019 Uh oh |