Wow, this is a great start! There are a lot of Forces stories on this site but most of them have never appealed to me. This one definitely looks promising. I'm loving the different approach already. Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to this story.

On a side note...why did you include Sally? This is just out of curiosity. Does this take place in the game verse, Archie verse, or your own universe? Either way, I'm alright with it but just curious as to why you decided to add her.