Reviews for The coming storm
Midnight Lost chapter 1 . 7/25
This was rather interesting.

Having my suspicions as to who the traitor is. Most obvious is Anko. Though I am not ruling out Yugao or even Tsunade as well, since the latter would be a nice swerve. Though, I am looking forward to seeing how the traitor navigates through Konoha and avoids suspicion whilst Danzo is in charge.

Looking forward to when you come around and work on this some more!
christopherrhaydon chapter 1 . 5/23
update ASAP
Ryu wolf chapter 1 . 12/29/2019
This is an interesting story
writerofshow chapter 1 . 8/24/2019
Cant wait for this story to take off
Nicholas chapter 1 . 7/3/2019
Do you think maybe you could do a naruto crossover with redwall? Here's a plot idea, naruto finds a scroll completely by chance and it allows him to summon characters from the redwall series both the woodlanders(such as martin the warrior sunflash the mace and trisscar swordmaid) and the vermin (such as cluny the scourge slagar the cruel and badrang the tyrant) and naruto especially feels a closeness to the foxes, one thing that would especially be funny is if naruto summoned the gloomer to frighten sakura and or ino, fyi the gloomer is a huge insane water rat who was kept as an attack dog by tsarmina greeneyes even though he was blind and death he made up for it with his sense of smell and touch, and naruto learns to use different weapons from them such as swords axes bow and arrow mace and knife throwing, if you haven't read the books or watched the tv series get on YouTube quick and marathon redwall!.
slythefoxx2 chapter 1 . 7/3/2019
If you know you really have a hard time writing more than a few chapters for any one story why not just write one-shots? Seems easier to just accept your leanings than continue to fight them with little change. I think you'd be good at it.
alphaprince0 chapter 1 . 6/30/2019
please continue this
Teo chapter 1 . 6/14/2019
Looking forward to read the next chapter also can u do a Naruto lemon story about him only going out with kurenai and anko pretty please.
snake1980 chapter 1 . 6/12/2019
have to say for the first chapter its different but still very good. looking forward to the next chap.
FenreldStormblade chapter 1 . 6/11/2019
interesting story.. I can only hope you update soon and not abandon a story
hellfire45 chapter 1 . 6/9/2019
Good chapter and I can’t wait to see what happens next
insanemaelstorm chapter 1 . 6/7/2019
This was great. Like how the onepiece world was joined with Naruto verse. Wonder how the clan heads will react to what Jiraiya did. Can't wait to read more
Draegoon chapter 1 . 6/7/2019
This is awesome! And that's all I really have to say except more please. ... More please.
david.teague.3950 chapter 1 . 6/6/2019
That last is a good question you've got four stories that I favorited because I found them interesting. First was Invincible, second was Keys to the Kingdom, third was Return of the Golden King, and last was life with a Succubus. At first I thought I had favorited Empathy but I guess I hadn't, so that's actually five stories I'm waiting for an update to, this could be a 6th.

Hm, now there's a possibility. So this is a bit of a crossover with a slightly amoral Naruto. Naruto is capable of knowingly using his chakra to manipulate the Space time continuum and is able to summon anyone he wants and they serve him faithfully in anything he wants. Among the summoned are: Bulma Briefs of Universe 8 summoned before she was about to be killed, Android 18 also of Universe 8 who was summoned before Gero could put the finishing touches on her making her a ruthless killing machine. Android 21 who was summoned just after she tackled her evil counterpart, Kale and Kallifla of Universe 6 and last of the DBZ/Super/Xenoverse Towa who was summoned seconds before Mira could absorb her.

From Naruto's world females he desires he either puts a series of special seals on their necks or if he's vindictive enough he breaks them turning them into his pets(got that idea from Invincible). There are some that he doesn't do either of that to like Yakumo Kurama he gained her loyalty after he had Towa infuse the girl with different cells that would strengthen her body.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/2/2019
NarutoKatakuri?
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