Allowing everyone to see his memories despite them not allowing him to see theirs isn't something I'd call ninja like. Naruto is too trusting and a bit submissive. Sure, he can't defeat the whole Justice league but he should at least refuse something as personal as a memory viewing. A quick thought scan should have been the most he would allow. You giving everyone his memories makes them know everything about him. His strengths, abilities, knowledge and weaknesses. You've basically made him one of the easiest people to defeat as every member of the justice League would know how to beat him. Naruto shouldn't just bend knee to strangers even for the sake of diplomacy. Sasuke, Kakashi, tsunade or basically every smart ninja would have left since they confessed to not trusting him. You're contradicting the plot of this whole fic. He went on a philanthropic mission and yet he's still not smart enough to know when a conversation is changing into an interrogation? He just whines about them not trusting him and yet he still comfortably allowed them to see his memories? Even after that, a simple complement is enough for him to still talk about what they saw as if what they did to him wasn't the worst possible violation of privacy possible. The story was good until you took away his tactical mind and gave him the brain power of pre Shippuden Naruto.

This is great I can't wait to see what you do with this

might want to change narutos superhero name, there is already a hero named monolith in the dc universe

Another great chapter, I look forward to the future of this story!

I’ll admit this is a really great first chapter, thank you!

This is interesting though I am confused about something. Why didn’t Naruto just disintegrate Amazo with his Truth Seeking Balls? I know he can’t use them against a living opponent Becca of the whole soul destroying thing, but he knew Amazo was just a “Puppet”.

Bit of a massive hole here. Not a plot hole, but more a logical one. Naruto himself is from his nation's military, you've even let him be fairly high ranked and described him reading loke of documents. Given knowing several secrets in the canon series, never mind the stuff that he'd have learned going up the ranks through the last few years.

Yeah, Naruto shouldn't be letting J'onn read his mind like this. Maybe if it was something kind of low level scan that could tell if he was lying I could buy it but you even bring up that Naruto wouldn't be allowed to see Clark's and Bruce's memories.

Honestly, only J'onn should've been allowed to see Naruto's memories, since he's letting Naruto see his.

Also there's very little reason for them to go through all his memories like this as well. They only needed to see that he wasn't lying about being from another world.

Still, I like the way that you've written the characters themselves. There's a good amount of expected actions, there's even justified annoyance for actions that they commit without any bashing for those actions.

I look forward to see what you'll do next with this setup. Since you changed that Black Canuary wasn't part of the Amazo fight, I wonder what other kind of changes that you want to make the canonical events of Young Justice?

Great chapter!
Keep up the good work!

I'm liking it

The thing i find off putting in any dc fanfic is the mind reading to find out if your a good person or not. Other tgen that it was an good to read

Naruto poz end is pretty op
And yet he is SO weak here

He can sense emotions

And why he decide to reveal SO much of his past even censored
And gain nothing in return

They somehow lied3to him before how is he sure that they wont do it again

He should be at least wary of them and giveso much and gain nothing but words which May be false again

While I’m definitely willing to accept that Superman and Flash together could possibly defeat Naruto, I’m definitely not gonna agree with Green Arrow.
He’s at most peak human. Even if it was a nameless Jounin they are stronger, faster, and more durable than a peak human. Their not as strong as an atlantian or an amazon but it’s enough for them to make a big enough difference to beat peak or athletic humans like Ollie.
Your really wanking Ollie to a level he’s nowhere near and underestimating how strong ninja are.
The only way I can see him beating a Jonin is if he somehow lead them to a spot where he was far away enough to use something like sleeping gas arrow without them noticing which would require the perfect setting and some amazing luck

I'm really liking this story. Thank you for writing it!

super

First chapter was nice, good action etc. Showed Naruto in a good light and that he had a mind and tactful. Second chapter was more disappointing. Mostly because like all other stories with a crossover between Naruto and Justice League, Naruto is forced to reveal his whole being.

Yes, seeing his life up till now is a breach of trust and privacy. I'm not happy with that part, even if he hit Kurama, it still is far too much. Especially when Superman and Batman refused to share their part of life. Second is that you should give Naruto Mokuton. Why? Sasuke the bitch who doesn't deserve the sage pwoers got the rinnegan, got the Sharingan which his ancestor used. The Susanoo etc.

Meanwhile Naruto got only the truth seeking balls. Naruto deserves the whole thing, Mokuton and the other elements to pay for all the shit for him. But sorry, but your second chapter was not just fair and the Justice League need to pay.