I would prefer, less qiotes, and more comments, and for you to go ata faster pače.

You know I want to see cat say it should be you to jon. The reaction of people would be interesting, especially when jon nd robb say goodbye and jon say she is kind. That really like slap in face.

I don't understand. You said 15 but I counted only 14.

You have a great writing style. And the topic is very interesting. I sincerely hope that you have the patience and time to finish this story.
There is one question and one sentence in the text.
The question is simple: how old are the heroes? It seemed to me that Jon, Dany, Robb, and the rest of the children were the same age as in the first book, and the events that were happening in the show's timeline were still two years away.
The suggestion is based on the idea that in order to avoid a conditional happy ending from the show, and at the same time not change anything much, you should focus on the label of The king Night, that it affected Bran and slowly, non-inevitably, turned him into the night king. And then you just need to add a scene where king Bran's eyes turn blue at the end.
And make it clear that since receiving the mark, the night King has been influencing other people through bran's abilities, i.e. Tyrion's stupidity in recent seasons, Jon's lack of will, Daenerys ' madness, it's all the influence of the Night King.

Very nice, very on-character showing the cast. I like that you are actually showing parts of the dialogue from the show, most fictions like this just summarize, not nearly the same thing.

He-he-he, wait until John and Ygritte meet up. That will be hilarious for Robb, Theon, Tormund, Ned, Davos, and Sandor to see.

maybe next show rhaegar lyanna and elia secret wedding. then show the tower of joy on jon was born and ned promising lyanna to protect jon from everyone.

Apparently this was updated yesterday but nothing new is up. Did it not upload correctly?

Did chapter 6 get reposted? I It must have as I was unable to post this review there. It says I’ve already reviewed it. It said that this was updated on 9/1. Today is the 2nd. But I swear I’ve already read this chapter. Kinda sad as I got so excited for a new chapter. Have I told you how much I Really Love this story? It’s such a cool take on GOT. With putting the show in the story so that they are alll aware of what we as the viewer see, is such a Cool twist! Well thank you and I am still really looking forward to the next chapter!

Please don’t re-write! Re-writes never get finished!

Also don’t bring in more characters. These Are the right characters to change things for the better later

Happy to have you back! Thanks for another update! 3
Keep it up!

Awesome update :)

Fanfiction is telling me that this is updated just now but I don't see any new chapter

Well written

Awesome chapter! Loved it! Can’t wait for more!

Please keep updating! I’m absolutely addicted to this story. It’s so rare to find a great fic with equally great writing. Keep up the good work!