Keep it up I love this story please.

Hmm, Team Evil Natsu has assembled and now we have a clear goal in mind...neat.

As always, good chapter!

I liked it, very well done. Enjoyed the mentioned and use of the Fel Etherious, though I would like to point out that the Mindless aren't referred to Brainless, just Mindless. There's a difference. Other than that I enjoyed the rest of it.

Cool to see the whole enemy group of Draconus and his allies, interesting beings and what they can do. Ironically, I have been thinking of a character who will be a personal guard to one of the Spriggans of the Multiverse spanning Alvarez Empire capable of also controlling technology like Mechanic, or at least something of the sorts haha. Now that I am thinking about it, since Traveler, his allies and the Watchers know about the multiverse spanning Empire, do Draconus and his allies know about them also?

Fun to see how Draconus also can devour the life essences and energies similar to how Moro from the Dragon Ball Super Mage or Baphomet of the Fel Etherious in his first appearance can do similar things. I can't wait to see what else you have in store for the future, and if you want to use any other ideas from me or my characters and worlds feel free to let me know and we can discuss about that if you wish to do so.

Now, there is something I want to point out that I forgot to mention before in previous reviews. Usually when someone is speaking you would want to avoid having the next paragraph start by the same person speaking still since it gets a bit confusing. It should either be the start of someone else speaking or whatever else you wish to put there. For example, when Draconus spoke at the end to his allies, the next paragraph after the one he speaks in shouldn't start with him still speaking still unless a break happened. Something like this for example.

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"Spare me your flattery Oracle, I shall take care of this E.N.D and you will create a path to the Prime World while I am at it. I expect no failure from any of you, do I make myself clear?" The eight individuals nodded and bowed to their Lord, "Good. Now go, and remember," His red eyes glowed, "If you see the traitor, kill him, give him no chance of escape."

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Or if you want a break between the two times he speaks, have it something like this.

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"Spare me your flattery Oracle, I shall take care of this E.N.D and you will create a path to the Prime World while I am at it. I expect no failure from any of you, do I make myself clear?"

The eight individuals nodded and bowed to their Lord.

"Good. Now go, and remember," His red eyes glowed, "If you see the traitor, kill him, give him no chance of escape."

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I'm sure you get the idea. It's nothing major it's just how I thought it was how writing a new paragraph when someone new speaks instead of the same person unless there's a break paragraph between the same person speaking so it doesn't look confusing. You are free to ignore this if you wish to do so however, I'd just figured I would give my two cents about it since you want us to be honest when it comes to criticism.

All in all, enjoyed it very much and can't wait to see more in the future. And thanks for the potential ideas all of this new information may or may not give me. *Laughs evilly*

Any chances of any of these metaverse premises being make into their own stories?

Also, I say “metaverse” because both the concepts and names of these different universes all seem to follow the Rick & Morty diverging outcomes to events resulting in branching what if worlds as apposed to different worlds existing independently from whatever outcomes occur in any world but not forbidding parallel aspects, i.e. Edolas and Mashima’s other works.
(Sorry for going on on that, it’s just something that’s been bugging me about this multiverse fics)

I will say this. Well written...but I really hate all these guys. Can't you just kill them all Instead! Draconus needs to die an embarrassing death

love your style of story telling. So, It will be boring next 2-3 month for us. Good luck for future.

No worries pal, take all the time you need to focus on your university stuff and settle stuff at home. All that takes importance over anything else. Be safe!

Kinda sucks but I’m not mad, school learning in or out of it’s rough so all I can say is have fun and do your best.

As for the other guy...hmm, your probably correct.

This was good! And as an American, the left are getting worse everyday. Socialism and cancel culture are a cancer that needs to be crushed before A second civil war does happen. Its...a scary thought which I hope doesn't pass, but these socialist rioters are committed to tearing down the U.S. And all it stands for.

Ahhh...I do hope Yang makes a recovery! I bet Nicole could help after her And the others stayed!

Yep you sure trolled me betamax, that's why you're quiting writing fanfiction and i'm still here. Thank god for me.

Oh and to all the other pussy farts on here who want to jerk off Betaverse Walker. The only people I told to kill themselves are the disgusting pieces of shit who write rape fetish fics. Fucking pathetic that this soyboy defends rape fics. Then again it's pretty clear he's a mysogonistic piece of garbage so it's no surprise he jerks off his tiny peene to rape.

I'm so glad I made you feel so bad that you needed to have a good long cry and quit writing. Thank god for me.

What a fucking pussyfart having to go crying to your fanbase to circle jerk to make you feel you fucking hilarious LMFAO

People are just haters for a bad day, ignoring them is the best way for them to stop. And keep it up, whenever you come back I love this story please.

Amazing chapter, it was really cool to see the Watchers