for what it's worth, the wiki is hot garbage and full of mistranslated fanon.

Oh hey, this is still alive! The AO3 version was dead and I feared the worst. Glad I googled it just in case.

I love this story. I hope you continue writing it. It's so rare to see Louise in a yuri pairing.

I'm quite interested of this story! Fanfics about HOMM are so rare. Is it possible to create HOMM crossover where Naruto, Lelouch, harry Potter or some other reincarnates into world of HOMM 5 or 6?
Example given: Do you know anime Madan no Ou to Vanadis? Tigre and Vanadis could reincarnate in Ashan during HOMM 5 timeline in different nations. Olga in Grimmheim, Sofya in Irollan, Valentina in Ygg-Chall, Ludmila in Silver Cities and Tigre, Eleonora and Ludmila in Griffin Empire with Tigre born as younger brother of Nicolai Griffin.
Just a suggestion. Tell me what you think.

Believe you, me. Louise may not realize it just yet, but the audience is well and fully aware of where his true loyalties lie... We've all seen it happen enough times in both fanfiction, and canon, to know it's coming. If there ever was a story where he DIDN'T turn coat, I've yet to hear of it.

He has six heads now?

Neboqyu wearing bowties. Is that a Ghidorah reference?

Well, this was certainly a full chapter, and I wasn't bored for a second. Don't really have much to comment on, other than how Louise is going to have one hell of a headache.

When you say you created a fictional pantheon, are you talking about world building?

Oh, and one more thing: Neb holding court with himself. I demand details, because that was one of the funniest things I've read in a long time.

It is a beautiful chapter. Thank you. I have reader thousands of stories and yours is in the top 20 easy. It's a shame not many people seem to know about this story, but keep up the great work.

Well this sure was quite the ugly street fight. Louise's lust for ladies is starting to really take hold if she's ogling barmaids when she's got her ladies with her. I suppose she'll have to be so bold if she's gonna manage her little harem.

Curse your sudden but inevitable betr- hang on, hellhounds are not Wardes...

Oddly, I think my favourite part of this chapter is the bits with Montmorency finally admitting the big F (for Friendship). Though therapy dragon time with Tabitha was nice too; there's not enough stories where they really interact.

Took me a while to get through this due to holiday madness, but I was never bored.

Nice to know that I can add Malassa to my personal pantheon... holy crap that thing is getting big.

I will definetly say that this rewrite is a improvement over the original. not that there was anything bad about the original just saying I like this rewrited version a lot more than the original both stories are great and good luck in making new chapters for this rewrite

Louise, Kirche and Tabitha are the best damn trio. (Bias? From me!? Why, I never!) I still like that you're giving the HOMM mythology a more prominent part of this rewrite; helps give the familiar events texture even though you're getting dragged to Albion too. (I sympathise, haha.)

And 126k words to get out of the beginning arc. That's certainly a lot!

Louise going full dom over her harem is something I'm going to be waiting patiently for. The girl honestly deserves that much happiness.