Great story

You did amazing! The detail seemed very well thought out. Keep up the good work!

This was your first lemon?!Srly?! It was really amazing! I loved it so much!

this was great keep up the good work

Good story with a nice flow. Did mis that Marinette didn't point out that they were in Adrian's room and suggested a change of venue, as she didn't know it was CN's room, since it would be really embarrassing to do it in someone else's house, room, bed, you get the gist.

Still gets a 10/10 from me. Since it was a great read with lot's of love and sweetness. And quite the details.

This was a great one shot! All your sentences flowed and made sense which is more than I can say for most other fan fiction writers. Your love scene was steamy and realistic. You should be proud of this work!

hey this was pretty good! i've never seen any reveal with marichat smut turning into adrienette so that was cool hahah i think the reveal was pretty realistic and your writing was pretty heckin steamy hhaha kudos!

LOVE IT!

I loved it actually. I thought the writing was not the typical which was really nice for a change. Lemony writing is hard. You captured all the important bits of the moments. Great job. Keep em coming! Lol

Awesome story!

This story is good.
I like the worry in the beginning and the smut in the end.
So... yeah I'd definitely would enjoy reading more steamy stories (they don't need to be one shots) from you.

You should write morepleaseee3

Really nice job, I wish there was more. Hehe

Good job!

OOOH! This was awesome! SO sweet and some good smut! Loved it! What a cool way to reveal them! Would love to see other like oneshots where their identities are revealed in different ways! Could be really cool!