Sci, you have written another wonderful chapter, and it was a joy to read.
Sadly Matsuo is unable to provide you with commentary etc etc this time around, and I have my doubts if he may be able to do so in any of your other stories either.

If you'd like more information please PM me. Thank you. :)

Great story as allways. But slash version is little better.
Pleas Update as soon as you can manage!

Nice, I like how you got everything tied together.
Thank you,
Juanita

Hmm, so Prompto has a mer form as well as a harpy one? If so I wonder what kind of mer he'll be. Would that make others more warry of him or less? Well, all caught up finally now I've just gotta check out the slash version of the story, I'm curious on how closely it sticks to the same plot of this one.

It makes sense that they'd have to let a doctor in on Prompto's new status as a harpy, at least she seems open-minded so there shouldn't be any problems from her end. Still, I'm sure someone is gonna find out and likely before they want them to, how much worse will that be then when he was just a Nif. Just that nearly got him killed twice, well at least he's stronger now and with the bond maybe the others will be able to tell if he's being attacked?

Looks like there's still another villain to try and ruin things, wonder what he'll do when he finds out that Prompto's not dead like he assumed.

Done torturing Prompto? So you say, but I have a feeling things won't be all sunshine and roses for Prompto. What with the whole Leviathan bit, it makes me nervous still he's already died once. What more can you do?

That’s a great cliffhanger! Awesome chapter too!

I truly hate you, arrgghhh. On both chapters that you wrote ends at the same place. Oh please put out the next soon, Pleaseeee. I am really enjoying this story on either format.
Thank you,
Juanita

omake:

"Oh manure. Here we go again." A familiar mauve haired lad face palms "But at least he has his friends to help him out now." the lad grins. "As for me? *shrugs* I'm just a bystander."

Omake: An "unseen" mauve haired male bystander in the room sighed as he shook his head: "And I'm a "ryusune", Prom. A "Dragon Child", and they haven't given me any grief at all."

That’s a big surprise to dump on someone!

Awesome! Prompto gets to fly!? Yes!

Omake: A mauve haired male watched the events unfold and smiled: "Welcome back, Prompto. Now show the world, no, show your _clan_ what you can do!"

"Prom's back! Prom's back! YES!" chimes a mauve haired male who had been concerned about his friends lately.