This is the worst type of bs I've ever read I'm so glad you stopped writing it

I have no idea why a shinobi village has to get permission to use something they already have. I mean, ninjas are supposed to steal, pillage and spy, so why is Naruto saying they’re not allowed to use the seals when they can just claim the usage of those seals as theirs, saying its property of Konoha? The premise to me is just confusing. I also have no idea why Naruto would have a claim to the assets his father had. I mean, what law would allow it to happen, he had no stake in it since birth and no one ever told him about it, only finding out (through inference) using deduction. The legal process of him owning those stakes are also weird, there was nothing, just word of mouth. And if Naruto leaves the village, the village can just ban Naruto from attending any meetings of the sort. And if he forces his way back, he can get fined a ridiculous amount, because strength is power in the Narutoverse and Naruto can’t slaughter his way out of Konoha yet. And if he does slaughter his way out, he might as well kill all those who wronged him, which is probably 80-90% of the villagers in this story.

Well that was better than I thought it would be

Boring not much detail

have naruto wake up in inuyasha.

something i dont get is why people allow the civilian council to make decisions. i could understand for the civilian side, but they have no right or power to have any say in shinobi affairs.
in all rights, the whole civilian council should be executed.
the damio i am sure would stand with the hokage, or at least take a long time to come to a decision about naruto. especially since he is a jinchiricki. i highly doubt he would allow the land of fires best trump card to leave.

nice story

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I like overpowered naruto's, harems too. Like samui as a main or only pairing.

Much of this fic was good, but it felt like you got bored or something partway through.

Samui was the main pairing but we only saw her in the last five percent of the fic or so and in only 2 short conversations/scenes.

We got more of Ino, Anko, Hana, Koyuki...

I don't know if this fic was merely a prologue to introduce naruto shinju for a bunch of later fics, or if you meant this to be it's own fic and then decided to do a sequel or sequels.

But this one felt more like a necessary evil to get your character introduced for the 'real fic' in the sequel.

Still, it wasn't bad all told, just that the last half or so became more of a summary, as opposed to the first half that was going well. Really the mission to snow was the end of 'the fic' and the start of the summary.

kinda expected a much longer story from from first 3 chapters but it's good in it's own way. great work

loving your story so far. also enjoying a harem with no main girl as sakura or hinata, too many of them already as it's.

Loved the story. kept me wanting more and now I cant wait to start reading the next one.

great story but way to short I was hoping it would continue on for several more chapters

Amazing and I cant wait for the next chapter. Based on how you explain in your author notes you are already done with this story and starting on a sequel and if I'm right then the sequel is naruto as the shinju. If I may be so bold, I would like to suggest that naruto battle the otsutsuki later down the road like what is happening in boruto from what I've heard. I would also suggest that naruto be able to gift his bloodlines to others after he is the shinju since as the originator of chakra it is only right that he can change others chakra. Just some suggestions to consider. I look forward to how this continues.

Great chapter man simply brilliant can't wait to see what happens next so please keep up the awesome work and keep updating thanks.

Interesting, I like it.