Reviews for Harry Potter gets smart and takes control - the goblet
Guest chapter 10 . 7/27
I read the whole Dragon and Phoenix series of Chris D'Lacey! They were so good!
Joedugan chapter 65 . 7/28
This is an incredible fanfic. I really love the ones where Harry starts to learn from and trust Bill, and I wish there were more with that as a factor. The two oldest Weasleys and the twin are my favorite friends for Harry to have. Well Done.
teachergirl chapter 65 . 7/28
I appreciate that you responded to comments about Bill grooming Harry. However much you deny it, it comes across very strongly. A grown man who has a 14 year-old boy sit in his lap while he calls him sweetheart is looking for that boy to be his lover. If you want it to be nonsexual, you need to realize how your writing this coming across.
Deal With Itt chapter 39 . 7/28
I was hoping he was going to burn down the house on his way out. He wouldn't be forced back if theres no house and they definitely wouldn't take him after it. Idk I'm a fan of revenge.
Yoto chapter 65 . 7/25
Bon chapitre
Dark Neko 4000 chapter 65 . 7/26
What will happen next time
get it right chapter 65 . 7/24
why do you have an adult seducing a child ... when a female says things like that to a male it is okay ... when a male says it to a female it is okay ... as long as it is in a term of enderment ... when an gay male says it to a male it seems to me they are recruiting ... i have some gay friends and they do not I repeat do not talk to me like that or others whom are straight ...
TigerCat chapter 26 . 7/26
Kids who normally rough house with each other may think nothing of a shove in anger. An abused one like Harry? All trust is gone in that moment.
kirsty21 chapter 65 . 7/26
cool update soon thank you
TigerCat chapter 15 . 7/26
Curious about why the trigger warnings at the bottom. Not much of a warning at the end, is it? I mean, you don't pull the fire alarm after the building has burned down... Just seems a bit odd, and I'd like to know the why of it.
Deal With Itt chapter 28 . 7/26
I'm really liked this story but this unhouse him stuff is lame. it's probably Crouch Jr or Dumby but still.
geekymom chapter 65 . 7/26
Brilliant chapter!
Deal With Itt chapter 19 . 7/25
Thought you forgot about the Centaurs its been awhile. I hope he introduces Neville to them seems to make sense with his love of hermology. Your Centaurs are awesome so far.
Harvest Lily chapter 7 . 7/25
The oddest thing in the fic so far is saying vegemite is okay! Maybe I used it wrong but it was an unforgettable flavor when I tired it!
Charlee56 chapter 65 . 7/25
A humanized Severus? What-a-CONCEPT!
This might just change a lot of things! Even Draco, dare I hope?
Harry's inheritance must come into play and he must start to assert himsrlf, if he's to survive.
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