Okay, I will be honest with you, this story is well written and has an interesting plot

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Again plss update your storys I love each one of them

Pls update

What happened to Lavinia in Chapter 1?

Nice

Big fan of the story, keep up the good work

Look, the story is good, but I think his personality should be a little different, that is, he is the son of Lord Shiva, but he has no trace that connects him or his form of Rudra. I want to see how he will save Lilith, as it can threaten a war with both hades and demons, although I don't like demons at all, so I don't care what happened to them. Just want to see how it will save her, strategy or pure power? After all how strong he currentily ? Being the son of the second most powerful being in the world and this age he must be very powerful in the upper echelon of the top 10 best.

Let's see. A completely random woman showing up, laying a harem claim, putting him in conflict against one of the Top Ten, all relying on Naruto's utter selfishness and good nature to put himself and possibly his entire faction into risk, just to save someone begging for help.

And Naruto's all for it. Jesus. First he married a woman and had a child in secret, now he's going to cause problems for his faction. I wouldn't blame the other Hindu gods for calling him a wastrel son... despite how positive his characteristics are.

I'm trying to like this fic, but it mostly just feels like the author railroading his illogical plotlines. Like, Yasaka's cute and all, but I'm not really a fan of the setting. And despite being a son of Shiva, Naruto just feels like a generic Naruto, it's like nothing of his heritage shines through.

went shit stop reading