Reviews for Young Justice Spiritus Machina |
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Guest chapter 1 . 3/29 nice |
SPARTAN-626 chapter 1 . 8/9/2019 Well have to say this looks to have potential and Im looking forward to seeing where things go from here and how thing in the YJ canon will change with the addition of DP and MLAATR. I wonder how Danny is in this universe, have a feeling he lost his friends and family to his evil future self. As well looking forward to see how his and Jenny's development with the Team and JL goes and who he will be paired with later on and if it will be just a single one or if he has several. I wonder if other DC elements outside of YJ will be added in later. Keep up the good work and hope to see more soon. |
joshua.feijo10 chapter 1 . 8/7/2019 muito bom esse one shot |
Coin Master chapter 1 . 7/4/2019 For a one shot, its pretty freaking cool. Could become a really long story if you wouldnt mind putting in the time |
TheFishKing chapter 1 . 6/25/2019 great good start I forgot about Jenny being a thing, but caint you work on Look not into the void? |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/17/2019 I enjoyed this way more than I thought I would. I don’t know if you used XJ-9 because of flowerprincess11 Xover story but regardless since that came out so many more unique crossovers have happened. I love the tie ins you made for . I love Jenny and Danny’s relationship. I hope either you or someone continues this as a story or a couple of one-shots. I LOVE YOU! Gonna start rereading your DannyxTitans story now |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/16/2019 Nice story. The only criticism I can really think is that you need to pay attention on how you write names. You often forgot to start with a capital letter (especially in case of hero names) and changed the hero names' writing style almost every time (for example: hawkwoman, hawk woman, hawk women, Hawkgirl, hawk-woman, Hawkwoman...) If you are unsure how a hero's name should be written, google it. In most cases -man/-woman ending are written withouth gap (expect Wonder Woman) and in other cases both parts of the name start with capital letter (Red Tornado, Black Canary, Justice League). I can't think any example of DC hero using - in their name. It's more of Marvel's thing. |
Eoin Twomey chapter 1 . 6/18/2019 Why was Danny with XJ9? |
Fizzbee23 chapter 1 . 6/17/2019 This is adorable |
Shifter2099 chapter 1 . 6/17/2019 This was a good story hope you continue it but i understand if you don't |