I mlm would love to read it, but u need. Beta. Not sure why but the flow is nonexistent

Happy birthday!

I am surprised to see a fellow SasuHina and SaiTatsu around these parts :) I read all of Tornadoes for Sighs and hope you update, I will be reading your SasuHina works too soon! :)

I’m totally envious with how good you built the story background-like the city did I mention how I love this story,drama and everything?You’re a very good writer and I can’t wait to read more of your story.

Hey there! I just want to say that I love this very muchhhh.I like how you develop the characters are ooc sometimes but I don’t think it’s a bad thing-that what makes this fic ooc-ness aren’t overdone and it makes the characters more real and I’m loving it!Can’t wait for more you have a good day

Good opm fanfic because it has a good premise and plot but please make your story a little more concised. It gets boring when the story is all about chit chats. Like man, you make Tatsumaki too much talkative than in the show itself. What made read up to chapter 16 is the logical consistency and development of this fic. Remove unnecessary conversation which has nothing to do with the development of your characters or make it simple enough that the story would be still the same. Just sayin. Keep it up!

What a nice and wholesome ending with the scene of Tatsumaki and her foster kids. Kinda hard to imagine her feeling threatened by some meager civilian childhood friend. But no one can decipher the inner workings of Saitama and who knows. He might have a thing for Aimi. And teaming up with Flashy Flash might come around to haunt her. We will see. Feeling bad for the hardships you're facing besides and wishing you all the best.

epic story please continue B)

Hah! Tatsumaki’s finally loosening up. She’s not the same tight ball of negativity she started out as.
Saitama’s story is making me reeeally curious about what you’ve got in mind for him.
I can’t wait for Zenko and Badd to meet him, maybe give him a kick in the ass he needs to stop being so gloomy and apathetic, to see that he’s actually appreciated (which I suspect he wasn’t at his home)

Ok this was the most irritating. Chapter i have ever read

You totally missed the characters- Saitama would've gotten pissed a lot easier, and here he straight up lies.

This feels like a very different interpretation of a relationship between Saitama and Tatsumaki, compared to many of the stories about them that I’ve read. First of all, having it read from Tatsumakis perspective is interesting and really conveys not only how complicated a person she is but also how hard it would be for Saitama to actually be in a relationship with someone.

I like the slow pace, I always have been fond of that style of build up, and I really like the frequent tense situations between the both of them. It makes sense with how terrible they are at socialising and conveying how their feeling. I think you’ve done a really good job with that.
There is a couple of things I’d like to mention now and the first is the mixing of the anime.

Tatsumaki feels almost out of place in the encounters that Saitama and Genos would occupy. I just can’t see her simply waiting there, watching the encounters and not doing anything. But it seems like she is weaker than she should be, her reactions towards these situations and enemies almost suggest that she is in the same league as Genos when she is is obviously stronger.

Second thing is just spelling, sometimes I see sentences that don’t finish or words that don’t make sense in the context of the sentence. Honestly not a big issue, but it can be a bit awkward especially when your writing is as good as it is.

I’m looking forward to your next update and hope everything is going alright.

What can be more said about this story than "it is great treat" !

Plssss updaate I love the story very much

OC!? AGAIN!? COULD YOU PLEASE END THE DRAMA!?