I hope you muse comes back to this story. It’s wonderful and I want so desperately for Elsie to improve.

You’re such a talented writer. I hope you get to continue this story.

This is one of the most touching stories ever! You give us such a loving,caring Charles. It’s wonderful to see him be the strong one in their relationship. I really hope you’re doing well in this crazy time and that someday you will get to continue this endearing story.

This is a wonderful story. I just loved it. I hope there will be more soon. Can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon...

This fan fiction is so touching, and I'm hoping that you'll come back to us with another amazing chapter. I hope that you're staying healthy and safe :)

Your writing is always so good. I hope you get time to continue this one. I’m loving it!

Rereading this after quite some time. I looked back and realized I'd only left you three comments (3,7,10) so I'd just like to throw in something for the amazing first chapter. That he broke down in front of Anna (and likewise) was so incredibly touching. That he hugged her and poured out his feelings to her...be still my heart!

I’m so involved in this story. Hope you come back to us.

Please update this fan fiction soon! I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter :)

Love all the love. Poor thing. I noticed she start remembering some details of their past life together. Looking forward to an update.

It's a shame how long it took me to read and review this.
You describe Elsie's situation so close to reality (if you know what I mean, I never make a lot of sense, sorry)
I love the progress of their relationship (they're married, woohoo) and it's angsty and dark and in character
Very well done

So very happy for your update. Fantastic story!

Ah poor Elsie, she REALLY needs some self-confidence! Love. The story so much ️

Once again, this is just excellent! So glad Elsie had her “tantrum” and Charles is still there. She needed to find a way to tell him more about how she really feels. Those snippets about their meeting and bits about their childhood...so good. O’Brien is even helping with her dress! Thank you so much for the update!

I’m so glad Elsie is opening up to Charles more and he’s finally listening and understanding what she’s saying. Looks like they might be back on track after all. Yay.