Epic tale! Well done

This story is amazing. I dont understand half the mumbo jumbo that is explained in the story but regardless the action and characters are what makes the story great.

Did you die

PLEASE FRIGGIN UPDATE!

so hey. just a thought. you could remove 12 Longswords(either from battle damage/being cannibalized for spare parts to keep the others going or thru destruction in combat and you could replace them with Z-95 headhunters. the Z-95 was released a few years before the Battle of Naboo, so they would be plentiful. they are small, only 16 meters. so you could fit 3 Z-95s in the same area that a Longsword parked in, and still have some room to spare(the exact number is 3.5[repeating] Z-95s for each Longsword, so by removing 12 Longswords you could park 42 Z-95s in them)in the Hangars. that way the Bismark would have more punch in terms of fighters, and more staying power(they have shields after all). also. will the Longswords get shields as well? cuz without them they wouldn't last long in the war, as their MASSIVE size would lend them to getting shot to pieces by the Droid swarm eventually.

Nice to see someone using an Epoch. everyone always uses the Infinity, the Spirt of Fire, or another well known ship. never seen anyone use the Epoch before, so thats a Major plus. slight correction to ur description of the Munificents. they are not Frigates, despite their name. they are Heavy cruisers. in SW ship names are fucky lol. but the rule of thumb is to disregard what they CALL ships and go with how big they are/how heavily armed they are. 100-200 are Corvettes. 200-400 are frigates. 400-600 are cruisers. 600-1000 are heavy cruisers. 1000-2000 are Star Destroyers. 2000-5000 meters are Battlecruisers. and anything over 5000 meters is a Dreadnought. the Munificent is 850 meters long, this making it a Heavy cruiser. there are some exceptions, for example, the Carrack class cruiser. it is only 350 meters long, which would make it a Frigate, but its heavy weapons put it in the Cruiser category. and another is the Secutor. it is 2200 meters, which is a Battlecruiser. but because of its role as a carrier and its limited weapons, it is a Star Destroyer.

Why haven’t they attached an armored prow to the Bismarck? (other than the MAC placement, of course.) The CIS ships don’t seem to be built to survive ramming.

Good writing. However, you got everything wrong about Star Wars Space Combat, making all the classic mistakes.

1. Shields render long range engagements impossible as stellar debris lessens turbolaser efficiency at long range. This why fighters are still used as they pass through shields at speeds high enough to take out soft targets on ships. leaving them vulnerable to heavier ordnance.

2. ECM/ECCM in Star Wars combat is extreme, making target locks except at close ranges impossible, which is why they dogfight like its WW2 and use relatively few missiles. Bismarck should have seen nought but static on active sensors and been reduced to visual scanning methods till they closed to a few hundred kilometers and had immense difficulty locking onto targets.

Also there is no stealth in space, and the moment the first ship left hyperspace, Bismark would have been picked up due to its latent heat standing out in the background if nothing else.

Great chapter

Will be interesting to see how the rest of the galaxy will react to the UNSC and there fighting skill.

Would not surprise me if the Republic is starting copying there tactic when they see the result.

Keep the chapters coming

The Omnissiah demands that all of the Abominable Intelligences (AI) and these knock-off Men of Iron (droids) be purged!

Are they UNSC? No? Then siding with them purely because they're human is nonsensical.

The UNSC forces should’ve also argued for civilian conscription into something resembling a PDF (Planetary Defense Force), or at the very least, a civilian militia to buy time for reinforcements.

BTW, I don't think turning in real space is necessary for slipspace jumps, since they can turn in slipspace and adjust course, although staying in slipspace for too long is hazardous since it does contain physical material which requires energy shielding or armour to deal with, that's actually the real reason all UNSC ships have so much armour. Apart from that the chapter is great, I wonder how they'll deal with the limited supply of Bidents and Shivas, they don't have a support ship so they have no fabricators right?

Good job keep it up

Fifty Munificent's and 12 Lucerhulks...Jesus that's scary! Munificent's aren't all that scary, but 50! That is teryfying, add onto that the Lucerhulks. No wonder the Republic hasn't fought that yet. They would have to commit everything to win that assault. And as a side note, I wonder what the Captains thoughts would be on Anakin or even Kenobi?