| Reviews for Returning Home |
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   Ghostwriter chapter 10 . 6/28 Awesome chap. I love it. |
| Ghostwriter chapter 9 . 3/3 Aww, love to see them being so playful together. |
| Filipinagirl04 chapter 9 . 3/3 You should change the format of the story. It’s hard to understand it. |
| megan.real chapter 9 . 3/3 Chapter 9 was attacked my the Microsoft metadata monster - could you repost as plain text, please? |
| Aargemtum chapter 5 . 2/28 Hi! This is the third time I read your story and I really love it. I hope that you're well and in the mood to write and if you don't that's okay too. Kudos 3 |
| Ghostwriter chapter 8 . 1/20 I love it. Well done. |
| CocoRocks chapter 8 . 10/5/2019 Interesting chapter. |
| CocoRocks chapter 7 . 9/8/2019 Interesting update. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/20/2019 "Your" means "belonging to you"; "you're" is a contraction for "you are". You would do well to seek out a Beta. Although you write well, everybody can learn, and they will help you to convey your thoughts more succinctly. |
| CocoRocks chapter 3 . 7/9/2019 What a great update. |
| CocoRocks chapter 2 . 6/29/2019 What a great update. I look forward to the next chapter. |
| CocoRocks chapter 1 . 6/28/2019 Interesting story so far. Keep up the good work. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/23/2019 WOW! Waiting anxiously for the next chapter! |
