Huh, didn’t expect that when jumping in here. Oddly interesting.

Spelling wasn't too bad. Content was pretty good. Only question is, Who's next?

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Noice

Perfect and update soon please
Ichigo x kitana

Good lets see more

Keep it up

Interesting