Great job shame you stopped

Ooohhhhhohohoho~ I can feel a thrill down my spine, reading that prologue. I must say, I am VERY excited to read your rewrite, especially wanting to know how you plan to change the story. More drama? More conflict? More romance? I don’t know, but what I do know is that I’m eager to discover them~

I hope to see a update soon great story

I’m pretty sure kitsune, along with every other Japanese noun I can think of, is already both plural and singular. Look at this kitsune, look at all these kitsune. You’re trying to apply one culture’s pluralizing to another’s grammar. Like trying to apply Japanese sentence structure to English sentences, it won’t work out nicely.

Naruto aparece frente a Rubí al ser ella pura de corazon.

Naruto habra tenido descendientes de diferentes parejas que tuvo en los siglos atras y que fueron adorados como heroes.

Naruto esta relacionado con los guerreros de ojos plateados?

I am glad to see that it will be rewritten and I can’t wait to see what will be done about summer and raven and if naruto will be the father of ruby and yang

Awesomeness

Good chapter but a bit odd as in a past chapter it was said how Salam, ozma and naruto made the maidens but with how there past is in this chapter that would be impossible

I've actually read through a good few of your fics. They are entertaining and unique, this one is no exception. However there is one big factor that is utterly and unbelievably pissing me off, that is how you have made existing characters in the RWBY Verse be reincarnations of Naruto's buds. It is honestly pissing me off something fierce. Honestly ruined it all for mw pretty much.

Yeah that was an absolutely fantastic read

I Went into this deciding I'd give it 10 strikes before I would drop it. If it could capture my attention before I counted 10 strikes I decided I would read the entire story.

1. Faunus discrimination is mentioned in the second paragraph

2. More discrimination filler when the reader already knows from the second paragraph

3. Yellow fox. Nothing out of the ordinary

4. She follows the fox without any hesitation

5. She admits this is a poor idea

6. "Alpha girl"

7. Blue fox. Nothing out of the ordinary

8. Our strong proud female faunus character immediately loses her pride and strength when faced with power ranger foxes

9. Comparing the now cowardly character you've introduced us to, to a godly character you're currently hyping up.

10. Having the female lead blush the instant she meets the male lead.

I'm out.

I have to say thank you for at least ending the story in a good way. Not just stopping at one part. I like it a lot even if I think that there could have been more.

Well I mean what else can I say but that the ending was pretty whack?

Shame it ended like this, tons of plot points that haven't been given a definite conclusion yet.

At least it was a fun journey to the end!

Looking forward to your upcoming series though, I can tell it's going to be very interesting so good luck!

This really wasnt much of a harem story to me. Hell, he didnt even reunite with Willow as far as I know.

man, I'm pissed that you made Naruto the one who's guilty. Every man would do the same thing as him. If you saw yor lover hugging another man, you would react the same way.