Holy shit! You’re back?! So glad for the update!

A joltik would be awesome!

you wrote charmander instead of charmeleon, one time

Wasnt a fan of this chapter bill was a dick no way around it was just unneeded.

Ash, there are three phrases that you should never say:

Or not-It’s the word that can both trigger a random bird pooping in your hair or start the rapture, but only if you say it without other words.

It’s quiet in here-Not anymore, now that you opened your yap. Now we got errands spilling out of our ears (say it on a quiet day at your job; you’ll understand).

Nothing can go wrong(It can’t get worse)-Most shows will have an episode where a stupid character says that phrase, AND THEN SOMETHING GOES WRONG!

Just a little humor with a GREAT FanFiction. Have a good day.

This story had real potential, what a shame

Looking forward to the next update

Great chapter keep up the good work!

Thanks for taking mine into consideration (or at least two of them, not sure if you counted Sneasel) and keep up the good work.

shiny female alolan vulpix. nickname her Snowflake.

I love the story, ash catching so many different Pokemon from cannon makes me really happy, but I’m asking, is Archie gonna be a more important part of the story soon? Cause really the only interaction he’s had is when he gave ash buizel, and small references to him. Is he gonna be a more important part of the story?

nice chapter

hmmm... fire, grass, water, ground, normal, electric... how about a flying (spearow/starly) or ghost (phantump/duskull) type?

Ash needs Dark and Ice types as well. (Or kill two birds with one stone and get him a Sneasel. Sneasel are great.)

Woobat and Shuppet are some great, underrated choices as well, to cover Psychic, Flying, and Ghost.

nice chapter