Reviews for The Rise of a Warrior: Fairy Tail
altajir95 chapter 40 . 7/28
Nice ending for Tenrou Island arc.
Jaemos chapter 40 . 7/27
good chapter also it must be a terrifying sight to see the island you was just on explode keep up the good work
Guest chapter 40 . 7/27
A little bit of a more uneventful chapter, but I guess we got our fill of action from the previous one, and the ending of this one, but all in all well done. I look forward to seeing how you handle the time skip.
Morregen chapter 40 . 7/27
I only wanted Luke to last for like 1 Minute, since as of right know... Acnologia is not beatable... until the Alvarez arc, but it's alright. :3

I look forward to the LukeXCana moments in the following chapters! :3
Ragnas Bredvolts chapter 39 . 7/27
Uuuuhhhhhh
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Uuuuuuuuuuhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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I know there's a lot of gasm in there world, sexualgasm, mindgasm, eargasm and the infamous FOOD-GASM, but NEVER have I know it was possible to have READ -GASM, at least until today.
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Oh my GOOOODDDDNNNEEESSSS, You, You, YOU, you beautiful BASTARD, uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh you just made me love this arc all over AGAIN, oh my this is one of my MOST favorite chapters of this series, and we're just HALF WAY to the entire plot, oh my, you just have me wanting to read this again, and again, and again, and all over AGAIN. The few that got me this ,,,,, i don't even know to to properly convey my enthusiasm about this,,,,,,,,,,, are the likes of "This Bites" by Xomniac and stories of Vimesenthusiast along with "Dial" of DesertChocolate. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh man, the climax is so fucking EPIC, the way you did it is like, balancing the dialogue with the amount of fight, along with making the last fight STILL including the CANON fight, Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh MaMa MIA. And I read this at the time I just saw the SpongeBob Anime, along side my other read stories also in for the grand FIGHT of their STORY, Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh man, my friend, I CANNOT, stop reminding you how just I adore this chapter and how it has gone, some may say it cheesy, but I say "GET TEM' OUTTA HERE!". IT'S just shown how even if it was still Luke that made the final blow, it was not before his left but just fractions of his power, if he didn't have the others leave, they wouldn't have the magic reserve to pull off the coup de grâce and even Luke exhausting HIMSELF to this point will play a part for the next chapter this story, which we all know what gonna happen.
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But AGAIN I CANNOT express how much this makes me jump and bloody squeal my ass off, but damn it all this is the needed power to contend with the big guns of the series, this level of display is just a fraction of what, I believe is a suitable power level when you're going to face a walking, living Ender of Eras, the Immortal Contradiction, and many more.
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Damn, makes me wanna continue that old Fairy Tail story I willy nilly did and left in my back burner...like hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, should I or should I not revise and continue it... hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
I mean, I have decided on a magic and a bit of what may happen in the storyline but is it possible to expand it further?. Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Decision, Decisions.
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Eh it'll come if I have enough plot to make use off...
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Again anyway I CANNOT stop myself from express how I absolutely adore and Love this chapter and I may possibly may have something to suggest for the 1 year timeskip before the final war
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But Anyway, that is all for now and I hope you have a GLORIOUS DAY TODAY.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!
Guest chapter 39 . 7/25
Yet another epic fight that surpasses expectations, and with Luke reaching what I believe to be his absolute peak in terms of power at the moment. Keep up the good work.
Jaemos chapter 39 . 7/24
you really hate teen Titans Go don't you also doctor who was and is still a good show and great chapter keep up the good work
Morregen chapter 39 . 7/24
Nice! I was pleasantly surprised that you gave Luke such an good fight. I thought that he would make and Laxus entrance and then loose, like most oc's in fanfics, but that was great!

Cana giving Luke strength to gets up 3

I look forward to the climax of the tenrou arc and hopefully Cana's confession to Luke! Maybe let her confess and a second later Acnologia arrives, so Luke cannot respond or has a chance to react?

Maybe give him a Makarov vs Acnologia moment. Like he wants to sacrifice himself, to give Fairy Tail time to escape and let them fight for a bit?
altajir95 chapter 39 . 7/24
Totally awesome chapter and badass final showdown against Hades. Much better than in canon, which I'm very pleased. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Ragnas Bredvolts chapter 38 . 7/23
FIRSTLY, I like to say THANK-YOU, ABSOLUTELY FUCKIN'HELL THANK YOU! My good friend, I am in whole heartily agreed with your assessment of how the fight of Azuma and Erza had ended with Armadura Fairy, she keep saying it one of her most powerful armor (I'm including the likes of her Armor of Nakagami to the list, by far my opinion her strongest armor) but she uses it so little time and bloody hell, she even keeped saying it's the represent the pride of the Guild so why not use it. I know the Clear Heart Cloth represent her no longer hiding behind her Armors but goddammit Erza but using an extra layer of protection doesn't mean you hide on them, remember, ARMORS SAVES LIVES, if the Clear Heart Series were all enchanted (the breast bandage were enchanted with alot of haste or swiftness like that thing is probably several feets in length to fully cover someone of Erza's size and with the pants also having some more defensive and haste/swiftness enchantment) then I would have no problems with its always the End Armor, but NoPe none, no enchantment there, maybe in the 100 year Quest Storyline it have some, she did enchantment on her blade why not her Armors.
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Also Oh, My, GGGGGGOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDNNNNNNNNEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSS,,,,,,,,OH OHHHHHHHHHH, ya hold onto that one fight for some time now. The dialogue was amazing, the fight was AWESOME, lot of drama and fist fight, I can't say much as you already push all the right button on this fight but since I saw that Noah's Sacred Art has been coined a Name I would like to bless it with some ( with your permission of course)
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1. Gaea's Blessing/Mercy
2. Earth's Symphony
3. Mother Earth - Catastrophe
4. Land's Genesis
5. Genesis Cataclysm
6. Olympus' Summit
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I also noticed that while Noah did use the terrain to some of his advantage, he hasn't fully used it in a way I would assume a Earth Based Dragon Slayer would use like, create trench or depression on on someone feet to unbalance them, use it for pincher attack, create giant boul-no no no he did the F U no Justu, or even did what Azuma does and channel the earth's energy to his body. Oh maybe he can do something like me old Continental DS does and redirect his opponents kinetic/magic force to the ground. Anyway I enjoyed the two major fights and I am salivating for the next chapter of this story.
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Anyway that is all for now and I hope you have a GLORIOUS DAY TO- WAÀAAAAAIIITTTTTT
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NO,NO,NO, NO TIME THE FUC OUT,,,, I just got to say this but EDEN'S ZERO IS GONNA HAVE A FRICKING ANIME ADOPTION YYYYYEEEEEAAAHHHHH BOI, YEEEEAAAAHHHHH BABY,,,,, AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH THE FUCKIN MAD LADS, WITH HOW LIT SOME OF THE ANIME THAT ARE COMING OUT NOW IN 2020 (EVEN WITH THE PANDEMIC) AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH IS GONNA BE AMAZING. SPACE FIGHT, SCI FI, GIANT WORLD BUILDING, THE LOVE CHILD OF RAVE MASTER AND FAIRYTAIL IS ABOUT TO HIT ON LIVE TELEVISION, BOIS AND GIRLS, WAIFU AND HUSBANDO ARE COMING AT YOIR WAY, AND GOD THIS MANGA LATEST VOLUME OHHHHHHHHHH FUCKIN THOWN A YEET AT US READERS. OHHHHHHHHHH THE FUCKIN ANTICIPATION IS KILLING ME!
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Ok seriously now, have a GLORIOUS DAY TODAY!
Ragnas Bredvolts chapter 37 . 7/21
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh TFS Reference never can get wrong with those, also yeah, Kain is by far the weirdest and MOST,,,,,, ummmmmmmmm,,,,,,,,I would say ugly as beauty is subjective,,,,,,,,,but yeah, he looks like a grown ass Chiaotzu that took a wrong turn during puberty then somehow took a even wronger turn during adulthood.
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Also love Gajeel and Lucy team up there, thats a combo I wouldn't have guessed I needed to see, but still love to see,,,,, hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm,,,,,,,makes for a interesting,,,,,,ship,,,,,,,,,somewhat similar to how Levy and Gajeel started out, both got pretty beaten out by him when they're enemies but becomes comrades at the end, the difference just was who Gajeel interacted more, if it was Lucy he first apologized on, how would that turn out?
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Gotta say though, I'mma just imagining that last scene of this chapter and I got shivers running to my spines, Bluenote (Who names this people) is kinda bad ass in his magic but, look like a poor knockoff of Kizaru for some reason, his face look like a monkey that got aneurysm then his face got stuck in a default settings.
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Still wonder how this is gonna go, is it Luke vs Bluenote? Gildarts vs Bluenote? Or is i scenario.
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Guest chapter 33 . 7/20
Wow you did a great job in the edolas arc and keep up the good work
Guest chapter 38 . 7/18
Now this is the fight I've been looking forward to, Luke vs Noah, and it did not disappoint. I look forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
Guest chapter 38 . 7/17
Great chapter. If you get to the eclipse arc, can it be Natsu that’s the evil one?
altajir95 chapter 38 . 7/17
Awesome chapter. Especially for Luke vs Noah, that was very intense fight between two Dragon Slayers.
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