Hooray! Good job! I’m going to go check out your other stories and awesome

Luis is aggression reminds me of when I first moved to New York after my child abuse with my mom. I was really angry then as well. I had flashbacks and I still have complex post Trumatic stress. So it’s really nice to see someone go through it and an author that understands it and everything. I feel for her. So I do feel bad for the people who care about her. Writing is great, I’m glad you’re going to Japan

That was a great episode! And a great chapter! It’s so weird to read this from the future! Not that much in the future, but you get the idea LOL. Great job. I would hate Judith as well to be honest. And poor Luis yes. But I know it’s necessary for the story

Well, shit. I totally understand, but this is going to make things way more difficult if she’s not cooperating.

Oh my gosh! Halfway through! I don’t know if you have gone off-line, because that would suck and mean that you can’t update anymore. But this chapter was great. I really feel for Louise. I would hate to know that my feet are going to be cut off. Also, do Barbie dolls not have toes or something? I guess I would also like to see some of Tina’s awkwardness. She is a pretty awkward girl, and I feel like she would have a lot to say. Maybe show some of the things that are written in her journal? That might be good. I feel like her brother is getting a lot of the spotlight and you’re doing a really good job at writing him. I just don’t want it to be like that Tina doesn’t care.

I like this chapter. You seem to have done a lot of research on all the terminology. You explain things to me too! I think that’s really great and shows how much dedication and care you’re putting into this. It would be really cool if this was a real episode of Bob’s, but I don’t think all the hospital stuff would make it there LOL. It would be interesting to see how they would handle it or if they would. Also, I was about to say that none of them have to go back to work, and then I remembered that that is how they make their money LOL. Great job as always

Good as always. Poor them! LOL Eugene is so great seeing that it’s suitcases instead of bags under his eyes! I’m just going to call him Eugene, because my dictation won’t let me put Jean without putting the girl version so Eugene is better. Anyway, great chapter as usual. Nothing super happy in this chapter so I’m not really sure what to say. But I’m falling asleep on the couch reminds me of when they were trying to have a date night LOL.

It was a great idea to leave the park for a while. I can’t believe Logan and his stupid mom! Take accountability, Bushes! Poor Belchers! And oh, Gene, you knew it was coming. Just a tip, Tina needs to do more groaning. And maybe Gayle could visit if this lasts too long and Tina or Gene need support. Milly creepy, and great job as always.

You are doing fine with the consistency! I think that during the series, at this point they have 10 seasons, we have seen them go from high to low. I love the reminiscing that they do! I have always wanted more fanfiction’s about Linda and Bob’s early days as a couple! And when the children were younger! So I’m so glad you did that. Oh my gosh Millie came! That’s insane!

I don’t know when this was written, and I might not comment on every chapter. But that’s only because it’s really great! Some background. I’m visually tired, but I love Bob’s burgers and I love this website. has a lot more options than other websites I use that is much more accessible to me and my screen reader. So I want to double thank you for making the story. And I want you to know how much it means to me. I also love Bob’s burgers so it’s like, amazing. I hope Luis gets out and I can’t believe she still down there! I’m glad that Jimmy pesto isn’t being an asshole for once. And I love that gayle was trying with her weird praying mantis dancing thing LOL

I love finding well written fanfiction‘s! And I think you did a great job conveying the helplessness that everybody is feeling. I think about everyone really well, and I really don’t think that Mr. fish odor would add much LOL he’s kind of selfish. At least I think he is. Maybe Gretchen because she is Linda’s friend, but don’t worry too much about it. I’m just going to assume that she was in the crowd of people. Logan is such a little shit! But I can hear all the characters voices in my head and to me that makes it realistic fanfiction. I’m so glad there are like 16 more chapters. You chose a great title! So glad I found this

i am so investerd in this story

so goood i can almost feel the glimmer of hope.!

very well written.!

P.S. my brother seth said something very simulator. when our mother was trying to kill us.

P.S.S. i felt the emotion.

keeps getting better.