Love the story and hope u keep updating. When Sasuke comes out as female can u at least change the name even just a little bit?

yandere hinata is shaping up to be pretty funny

This is really good please continue.

amazing. CONTINUE PLEASE

You are a star!

very good

Hi this is a great story. I'd like to point out that when you put who was fighting son for the final part of the chunnin exams you left out Temari. Was that intentional or a mistake? But overall it's a great story. Nice job

i know that is indeed the deadly sin of Fanfiction, a very good story can make into at least a hundred and fifty thousand words only to stop at chapter 4 or so, strangely they indeed stop mostly at 4... anyway good story, good chapter, continue your work, even if it still a bit less realistic, at times instinct and nature come first, who knows... see ya at next chapter may expect someone with this account have longa*s comment

Be careful having too many girls is hard to write

please update immediately

Good so far.

tayuya please

I love this story keep it up! Although, if I may make a suggestion or two, one, don't kill off the hokage too many do that and follow right along with the manga and to be honest it gets annoying. Two, have Naruto come clean to the hokage about everything before he leaves. Finally, kill danzo and destroy root.

I expect more great work from you this is amazing so far i love it

I don't get it. Why do so many people who follow down every trope there is on fanfiction get a thousand reviews while others that write quality work get nothing?

The second god-like, OP, Naruto, neglect, and Harems come into play, all the sexually repressed teenagers come out and praise work that is constantly overused instead of something well-written. This story in just 10 chapters has up to 60,000 words and a thousand reviews while another that's probably of the same length or more has less, but actually keeps something on point and has better writing than most.

When will the age of wish fulfillment stop? It's such a hot topic to make Naruto a victimized Gary-Stu instead of a normal human being that has faults and can learn from them.

This is one of the reasons authors quit writing fanfiction because it all amounts to how much wish fulfillment there is in one story to another as if it is candy. But then again, I'm only guessing that there is going to be a 'challege' for your godlike character that surprisingly doesn't live up to their god-like power and strength.

When will the teenagers and adults grow up? When will people realize that there is better written work out there? But then again , how much do I want to bet that people in this comment section will go: iF yOu dOn'T lIkE iT, dOn't rEaD iT, hAtEr!

Maybe in psychological terms, people project so many of their wants and desires on a fictional character that they would want to put him on a victim on a god-like pedestal that handles their problems so fast that there is no character development, rather than make him a fleshed out character with flaws and fears that can't be overcome easily.

And so, everyone in this comment section to the writer themselves, what will you do when your brain starts growing and you start craving smarter content? Will you finally acknowledge the other writers on this site that actually write quality work and motivate them? Or will you just stay there silent because they write something your feeble brain can't comprehend? And doing so will make them feel unmotivated and won't see a reason for their story to stay on the site any longer since no one even wants to give them a simple review or feedback.

When all the good writers on this site are gone and all you have the same tropes being used over and over again, the tropes that cater to the will of the masses rather than the quality of work others put into theirs will one day become boring.

When their Heart and Soul are put into something, don't you all think it hurts when someone just hears crickets? Of course, this probably coming from an immature audience, how silly of me.