Reviews for Where Will We End? |
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vindictive Glory chapter 9 . 6/29 Only goku would ask about a cake |
vindictive Glory chapter 7 . 6/29 Was kinda abrupt |
vindictive Glory chapter 6 . 6/29 Ohhh maybe some vegeta babies |
vindictive Glory chapter 5 . 6/29 Pretty we written |
Somebody chapter 1 . 6/22 A good first chapter, but I have a little nitpick in regards to the "Peace sign". It's actual proper name is the "V sign" and it's primary meaning is "victoria" in Latin, or just simply "victory" in English. An old, wise and intelligent person like Roshi, strikes me as someone who should know this. So in short, the "Peace sign" actually means "victory"...just that. :) |
okkkk chapter 31 . 6/22 I love this take on Gohan get kidnapped. Its so refreshing to see him not as a psycho, but someone who obediantly follows Cooler while trying to limit unneeded casualities and believing that Cooler is doing what's best for the universe. Such a cool concept, good work man a favourite from me |
Anonymously96 chapter 32 . 6/22 Poor poor trunks I'm assuming he's the canon trunks whose come to this AU And since he'll anyway won't be conceived he will have to tell them the full story I'm guessing Update soon |
midnightscar17 chapter 29 . 4/26 What do you have planned with gohan getting back to goku |
The Jingo chapter 28 . 4/15 This is a top tier divergence. I like how you've developed all your characters, and I even ship your Vegeta/Serene pairing |
Anonymously96 chapter 27 . 2/18 Why does Gohan remember piccolo but not Goku or even Bulma? I mean he barely trained with piccolo a couple weeks, maybe few months at most and he remembers him as opposed to the people he's been around and been with for years? Other than that Great chapter Looking forward to the next arc |
I.C.2014 chapter 26 . 2/16 That makes sense. Keep up the good work. |
I.C.2014 chapter 9 . 2/15 Bulma’s mom isn’t wrong- I’m pretty sure Goku DID do that on purpose. |
AsokaBaadshah chapter 26 . 1/29 Just read the entire fic. It’s a very strong and original story. I love the dynamics between Vegeta and Goku’s stories. Now Gohan is in the Cold army? Very interesting. The only thing that doesn’t quite make sense to me is how Goku was able to best Vegeta in their fight without knowing the Kaioken? But anyway, it had to happen that way anyway for the story to move forward correctly lol. I’m looking forward to your next chapter! Amazing work! |
Anonymously96 chapter 26 . 1/25 A good chapter I hope this means that the bitterness between Goku and Vegeta would be lesser than in canon Also poor Gohan Just needs to wait for a few more months at most now Update soon |
Anonymously96 chapter 23 . 12/17/2019 So it's piccolo going through king Kai's training Vegeta will take approx 2 years I think Bulma could think up a gravity simulator to enhance Goku's training Only way he'll be able to stand up to or beat Vegeta Update soon |