Reviews for The Sign
1emubot chapter 15 . 8/9
awwwww Julien, stop blaming yourself for stuff ️
it’s cute how they all hug at the end tho uwu
Lemur forest fairy nerd chapter 14 . 7/13
Amalthafan is a fantastic writer! It's really hard to write a regular chapter, but this person is writing really long chapters! And all of them are filled with emotion and talent. I'm so happy that this person posted another chapter! Thank you Amalthafan!
1emubot chapter 14 . 7/12
Oooh you‘re back! Yayyy xD
Anddddd Julien gonna have to think about his feelings for Clover now
Hope you update again soon uwu
Lemur forest fairy nerd chapter 13 . 6/19
Whoever wrote this story is sooo talented and a really good author! (;
WDGHK chapter 1 . 6/12
I see Hector is being the only realist among the lemurs. As usual.
Moll Pecksniff chapter 1 . 3/14
Really Good!
You're spelling FOOSA as FOSSA, that's all. I don't know if it's because I might have a different program...thing or what...but anyway. Amazing! It's so rich and well thought out! Cant wait for more!
NorjTheRhino chapter 7 . 11/17/2019
Oct 30 c1 NorjTheRhino
To Amaltheafan,
First off, I want to tell you that you are a really good writer. The language you use is rich and your plots are well thought out. However, as I kept reading your stories, I saw your story called 'The Sign'. I was captivated by your vivid details of the setting, but soon, I began to feel upset. As I know the storyline you are writing about, I feel you definitely misunderstood some of the people you include in your story. I was really upset by some of the names you (in the story) called the characters, and the way they behave in your story, I feel, is unlike how they really behave. I think that your misjudgement of the people in your fan fiction really undermines your writing talents. Is there any way, and I ask this with kindness, that you could remove (or edit) chapter 7 of your story? I know that a random reviewer should not be telling you what to do with your writing, but I feel that in the last chapter, your writing is particularly hurtful. No matter who to, I believe in kindness. I hope you do not take my criticism the wrong way and that you take the time to read this review. Once again, I think you are a great writer.
Kind Regards,
NorjTheRhino
lionkingfactsguy3 chapter 8 . 11/17/2019
I'm glad Willie doesn't feel immense hatred for Clover. He's a sweet kid, even if he is a coward.
Guest chapter 7 . 10/31/2019
Omg! Drama ! Julien is right though, Sage is an inconsiderate jerk. At least Julien cares enough to stop Clover and make her see that Sage isn’t right for her. She knows he isn’t, she must, otherwise why would she fight back so much about it and become so defensive?
Fronda chapter 6 . 10/24/2019
im really loving this story, keep up the good work! can't wait to see how this will turn out!
Guest chapter 2 . 7/19/2019
Plz update soon. This story is great.