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Great it has a good starting point and as long as it doesn't make any wizards demigods or legacies other than Hecate legacies it has a the makings of a great story you just have to work it right.

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It's a good story and I think you should continue it! It seems like a nice crossover between the two series.

This much is nothing compared to others and with the direction you are going with Percy now I expect him to be a tough ass (Rated T so I'm guessing I'm allowed to cuss)

I like the story plot idea. The length was pretty good. Your punctuation and stuff could use some work, but that tends to come naturally as you get into the story more. There is no such thing as 'too detailed,' but describing things in a fun way catches the attention of readers. I'd like to see more of the characters' thoughts, but other than that, I liked it! I feel like I wrote too much...