Reviews for The Unexpected Family
BlankWhiteSky chapter 2 . 8/30
Well damn. I yawned too
kpop1392as chapter 29 . 8/14
I enjoyed reading this chapter and the fight.
kpop1392as chapter 24 . 8/14
I enjoyed reading this chapter and story. I like how their family is expanding.
kpop1392as chapter 16 . 8/13
I like that Natsu and Cana step up tot take care of the guild and their members.
kpop1392as chapter 5 . 8/12
I enjoyed reading this chapter. I like that Wendy and Gajeel helped protect Michiko and Natsu.
kpop1392as chapter 4 . 8/12
Aww, this story and chapter is so sweet.
kpop1392as chapter 3 . 8/12
Aww, I enjoyed reading this chapter.
chrislgerlach chapter 1 . 7/25
No joke, on like my fourth read through. Any ideas of when we’ll get the next update?
albertocervantes569 chapter 17 . 5/26
Wendy with wind and lightning magic...make her super fast and powerful.
or fire to give her more destructive power...
whatever you give her i can't wait to see what you do
albertocervantes569 chapter 11 . 5/26
while not that impact full it is still way better than Canon where they just brushed it off.
(I just like how you at least gave some spot light to lisanna)
AcidESP chapter 29 . 4/24
it's a good story, I hope you continue soon, see you bye!
FireDrakes chapter 29 . 4/21
So in a way Hades has the same plans as Zeref demons they want to erase magic for different purposes, Hades is to kill Zeref but at also would leave him without magic to be a considerable threat and the etherious to awake their master END yet as side effect they would also leave Zeref powerless and defenseless cuz the demons run on Curse power..
Imperial-samaB chapter 29 . 4/21
Beautiful chapter can't wait for the next onr
Mukuro Kaze chapter 29 . 4/21
Hmm, i find it logic that Hades needed to be stronger for this story if you wanted him to be a challenge for Natsu, afterall, he also had 7 years to become stronger.

But the infinite magic feels really, really cheap to me. If it was that easy to have 'infinite' magic, Zeref wouldn't have a need for Fairy Heart in the first place.

Even if the fight is good overall, i can't wait for it to be over because i want to see how the others will react to what happened in Fiore for 7 years.
August D. Hellsing chapter 29 . 4/21
In other words, you compensated for your own lack of creativity by giving an existing character a power boost, while nerfing the mc's power simply because... You wanted to. Fuck you, and your mum.
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