Reviews for What Lies Within
Riku Kingdom Hearts chapter 8 . 5/28
Awww Chocobo time yes. How cute and fluffy and more Prompto growth. It's just a lot of cuteness so much. I really love this concept.
Riku Kingdom Hearts chapter 7 . 5/28
Ah yay for Prompto becoming more human and more good bonding time with Noctis. It's really nice Noctis does care and all and that's what I enjoy most :)
Riku Kingdom Hearts chapter 6 . 5/28
Awww Prompto is growing at least. Good for him but ooh boy the light stuff!
Riku Kingdom Hearts chapter 5 . 5/28
Heh how they figured out the name was funny and cute.
Riku Kingdom Hearts chapter 4 . 5/28
Aww I really like the part of Noctis wanting to save the MT cause of all that stuff. I really can't wait to see the development with then though.
Riku Kingdom Hearts chapter 3 . 5/28
Lol Gladio suspicious as ever. But at least he and Ignis are seeing that the Empire has really done some dark stuff.
Riku Kingdom Hearts chapter 2 . 5/28
Ooh. I like how you said his eyes looked. Probably looks pretty at least lol. But aah Ignis isn't going to like this.
Riku Kingdom Hearts chapter 1 . 5/28
Ooh, now there is an interesting idea. Hmm I like where this is going for the premise of MT Prompto type stuff. Very interesting for sure.
krzys2000 chapter 8 . 5/26
I can not believe that it took me 3 day to find time to read this chapter so without further ado..
Chapter was good (as always). Pleas update as soon as you can! I hope that you will have good time writing next chapter.
Jostanos chapter 8 . 5/24
You meant "referring" instead of "refereeing", Sci. "refereeing" mean that Prompto was.. well.. being a referee. :) "referring", on the other hand, means that Prompto was making a reference to something. :)

It wasn't confusing to me at all, Sci. In fact the only thing that through me for a temporary loop was when you said "twelve years" and "Prince.. King Noctis".. It wasn't until I reread those sentences/phrases that I was initially mistaken and got the picture. Thank goodness! XD

Matsuo (The Mauve haired observer): YAY! Prompto is feeling better! And he not only has new clothes to wear, but he also has a new camera to take pictures of Chocobos and other stuff with!
darkpaladin89 chapter 8 . 5/23
Prompto-kun, stop calling yourself an it. *hug*
Lmppsc chapter 7 . 4/10
if this does not continue, I am not sure if I personally will be able to... Ugh I am in love with your stories! they are all so different. Can't wait for the next chapter! But until then on to another one of your stories!
Lmppsc chapter 6 . 4/10
aww he made a choice. SO PROUD!
Lmppsc chapter 3 . 4/10
reminds me of treasure planet 'what he'd come back with next' lol
Lmppsc chapter 2 . 4/10
hahaha love it
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