Reviews for What Lies Within |
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Riku Kingdom Hearts chapter 8 . 5/28 Awww Chocobo time yes. How cute and fluffy and more Prompto growth. It's just a lot of cuteness so much. I really love this concept. |
Riku Kingdom Hearts chapter 7 . 5/28 Ah yay for Prompto becoming more human and more good bonding time with Noctis. It's really nice Noctis does care and all and that's what I enjoy most :) |
Riku Kingdom Hearts chapter 6 . 5/28 Awww Prompto is growing at least. Good for him but ooh boy the light stuff! |
Riku Kingdom Hearts chapter 5 . 5/28 Heh how they figured out the name was funny and cute. |
Riku Kingdom Hearts chapter 4 . 5/28 Aww I really like the part of Noctis wanting to save the MT cause of all that stuff. I really can't wait to see the development with then though. |
Riku Kingdom Hearts chapter 3 . 5/28 Lol Gladio suspicious as ever. But at least he and Ignis are seeing that the Empire has really done some dark stuff. |
Riku Kingdom Hearts chapter 2 . 5/28 Ooh. I like how you said his eyes looked. Probably looks pretty at least lol. But aah Ignis isn't going to like this. |
Riku Kingdom Hearts chapter 1 . 5/28 Ooh, now there is an interesting idea. Hmm I like where this is going for the premise of MT Prompto type stuff. Very interesting for sure. |
krzys2000 chapter 8 . 5/26 I can not believe that it took me 3 day to find time to read this chapter so without further ado.. Chapter was good (as always). Pleas update as soon as you can! I hope that you will have good time writing next chapter. |
Jostanos chapter 8 . 5/24 You meant "referring" instead of "refereeing", Sci. "refereeing" mean that Prompto was.. well.. being a referee. :) "referring", on the other hand, means that Prompto was making a reference to something. :) It wasn't confusing to me at all, Sci. In fact the only thing that through me for a temporary loop was when you said "twelve years" and "Prince.. King Noctis".. It wasn't until I reread those sentences/phrases that I was initially mistaken and got the picture. Thank goodness! XD Matsuo (The Mauve haired observer): YAY! Prompto is feeling better! And he not only has new clothes to wear, but he also has a new camera to take pictures of Chocobos and other stuff with! |
darkpaladin89 chapter 8 . 5/23 Prompto-kun, stop calling yourself an it. *hug* |
Lmppsc chapter 7 . 4/10 if this does not continue, I am not sure if I personally will be able to... Ugh I am in love with your stories! they are all so different. Can't wait for the next chapter! But until then on to another one of your stories! |
Lmppsc chapter 6 . 4/10 aww he made a choice. SO PROUD! |
Lmppsc chapter 3 . 4/10 reminds me of treasure planet 'what he'd come back with next' lol |
Lmppsc chapter 2 . 4/10 hahaha love it |