Oh so not a jinchuuriki anymore huh... possible they could enter. Still hard to believe he didn't have a sort of defense for his level. I can only think about a sort of "occlumency" to let them see only what he wants them to see.

I am outraged. What they did in Konoha was unforgivable. It was mind rape. There is a limit to how forgiving one can be. Naruto was on probation and had already passed the T&I phase, he wasn't a criminal and therefore they had no right to do such a thing. He should have reacted ! It's ridiculous. You can't just rape someone and after that say, "Coffee ?".

Besides, I don't understand how it happened. Was he pretending ? Because I can hardly believe that Naruto couldn't have reacted in time. And he's a jinchuriki, they shouldn't be able to enter his mind. This can only be deliberate on his part, because otherwise it's a plot hole.

this story should at least have 100 times the amount of reviews.

Waaaaay too fast paced. Well written but you have got to slow it down

I straight up love this story. It’s incredibly well thought out and well written. It’s held my attention the entire time. I’m really looking forward to your next update!
My only critique is that sometimes it’s hard to tell when there is a time skip or a new scene.

abridged version of your fic: the time traveler "narumi" is basically you self inserting and everybody is gay.

for a guy who saved an entire village, they are assholes toward their savior.
Not sure what you aimed for with the two months he spent in TI or the mind rape he had in konoha, but it left sour taste.

I usually hate OC’s but you made me fall in love with Tsubame... I know it’s Sakumo for Narumi now and they are all really old probably, but I hope you write a side story or something of Tsubame (like an alternate ending or his point of view)

This has been really wild from chapter one. I've enjoyed it so much and can't wait to see what comes next!

Ah, from the comments, it seems it's a brainwashed homophiliac kind of story. No thanks.

confusing

OK, my suspension of disbelief can get me past all of the M/M. its weird for a medieval feudal society to be fine with it ok. BUT there's no way in hell a daimyo is gonna marry off his daughter to the other woman like wat makes no since their kan be no hours no man no babies SO NO!
Still, hope you keep at. it like the fic keep up the good work, just pleas make sense because of that's the limit of my suspension of disbelief.

OMG! Two C-Ranks gone astray!

yaoi? kys pls

Its an interesting new take on time travel fics. I love it, even what you have done with Orochimaru. Looking forward for more updates