I adore seeing Aziraphale and Crowley sticking together and supporting each other through the after shock of the attack and I love how Aziraphale reassured Crowley that he does deserve him and that he is the only one he would want to be with. And Crowley understanding that the bookshop being destroyed will hurt Aziraphale even more than last time and wanting to spare him the pain is amazing. I kinda hope though that God fixed it for them as a last present before she left them alone. Thanx so much, bye!

Loved it!

Awwww Crowley and Aziraphale are so soft for each other and I love it. I also love all the comfort in this chapter.

It was all very nicely done. Thanks so much!

This is so interesting! I have never read a story in my limited amount of this fandom of the consequences of their actions. I am so glad that Aziraphale smited Hastur and that God has marked them as off limits for anyone else in the future now. It was fascinating to see your depiction of God and how She has always had a second plan for the final battle and how it will still be on Earth but humans won’t be. I’m excited to see where the last chapter goes and how Aziraphale and Crowley act when they both are conscious and able to talk. Thanx so much, bye!

This is so bittersweet.

Another chapter that was agonizing to read, but I liked the end with Aziraphale's true form.

The food blogs part was funny.
It makes sense that they would have a sort of psychic connection.
It's 'scrap paper' rather than 'scratch paper'.

This chapter was horrible to read but very well written.
''So who's idea was it?" I think this should be 'whose'.
''I've always to see an angel fly," I think you're missing 'wanted'.

This was a great chapter. I loved Aziraphale's pov while he was talking with God, it felt very dreamlike and yet real. If that makes since?

Loving your story! Thanks!

"Awash with galaxies and stardust " Your dream sequence here is written perfectly! Looking forward to the final chapter!

This was a perfect ending to all the suffer ... but more to come? Looking forward to it!

This was wonderfully done! You described this violent, fleeting moment fantastically as the outside world of rain and traffic slowly comes back into focus. Well, well written!

Nicely done! You described the bond here (though painful) perfectly!

Great start to your story! Looking forward to the next chapter!

I am loving this story. Especially all the hurt/comfort and Crowley's pov is perfect. How much he loves and cares for Aziraphale is just so lovely.

It is all so well written! Thanks so much!