Reviews for Feel the Heat Around the Corner
DeathmatchDrunkard chapter 1 . 7/15
Well, damn, this fic's just made trudging through 80 pages of stories absolutely worth it. As my only contact with LoL is through fanfiction and the occasional cinematic, I can't comment on how 'in character' the protagonists are, but the whole thing's HOT.
linkjames24 chapter 1 . 11/4/2019
Niiiice.
Stelmarya chapter 1 . 7/17/2019
I loved it! It was both funny and sexy, and their personalities (as I picture them, at least) were on point. Great work :)
Akali x Shen chapter 1 . 7/15/2019
I have read your Akali and Shen story and I have loved it. They are few Akali x Shen stories. Though, you have made that story years ago.

And upon writing this fanfic, you have definitely improved, you explain with such great detail, even greater than before. Your story also seems longer as well.

So, I was wondering, if it wouldn't be to much of a hassle, if you could make more Akali and Shen stories. (Lemons and/or without, lemons preferred.)
Camarox1 chapter 1 . 7/15/2019
Waddle is never the one to disappoint, fantastic story. Caitlyn, despite her long probation in the League is surprisingly underused in smut stories, and that's a shame.
GeistLoL chapter 1 . 7/15/2019
Great stuff dude, glad to see you coming back to League for a bit of summer smut. Caitlyn was portrayed so perfectly in this. Hope you're doing well man.
Mixi chapter 1 . 7/14/2019
Damn, the build up made some already amazing smut into absolutely mind-blowing

I've been following you for years now and I gotta say your amazing improvement is such a joy to follow!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/14/2019
This is goooooooood
DeadMansPlate chapter 1 . 7/14/2019
Love the build-up. When it comes to smut stories, I find that the sexual tension between characters is a key aspect, something I struggle with a lot. I'm kinda a new writer, and I struggle with writing stories that include top-notch build-ups. In my opinion, stories that jump straight to the smut are sub-par compared to the ones that describe the tension increase, for teasing the characters (as well as the reader) makes the "spicy" scenes so much more satisfying to read. I don't know, I might seem a little overly inquisitive about the structure of smut stories, but regardless of my own writing troubles, great story! Looking forward to seeing Graves "fuck the law" more with Vi (and possibly Jinx in the future?).