I think he should have Zatana, Raven, and Starfire only as his girls. But this is your story and love the fact that you gave him Starfire. Keep it up.

damn it had i known this was your story i would not have read it yet. you always do this you make an amazing story then your asshole of a mind gives you another idea to write so it takes you longer to come back to a story. your honestly just a fucking tease T_T

Hello I like your story, I hope the continues at some point, greetings.

You know I just thought of something possible or a couple possibilities. First off is still technically a Naruto/Young Justice crossover, the only difference aside from some of the characters like Starfire and Blackfire being in it and engaged to Naruto, Naruto is from a different dimension where Ki is used and Naruto is a Saiyan. While Kori, and Kom are originally from this universe an experimental wormhole caused the girls to end up in Naruto's world. However despite that, he's able to teach Blackfire how to use Ki so that she can fly and fight even if she is unable to use the bolts of energy her race is known for.

This is looking great. 2 chapters in and I’m hooked. Super excited to see where this goes.

Hmm, it has caught my attention, though I’m just very curious of his past,

Hmm, a nice chapter so Naruto is with Raven and Starfire interesting anyways keep up the great work!

Good chapter and I can’t wait to see what happens next

Nice. Like how the justice league found out about Naruto. Like how Rachel and Starfire are already close to Naruto. Looking forward to reading more

Please continue
Can’t wait for more

vwry nice though longer chapters pls

Nice chapter.
Well, I am interested in how you'll develop the story.
To tell the truth, I am not that thrilled with naruto joining the league especially with their God forsaking rule of non killing.
Naruto is a Shinobi, a killer, despite that in Canon we see that naruto did not kill but he is ready to do if necessary.

I am interested in how will you make naruto interact with the league.

The only thing I suggest is to make naruto keep his ability and origin a secret.

Esta muy bueno la historia más como le fue a naruto en la nueva tierra más sus poderes mas que pasara esta con la liga de la justicia o los jóvenes mas que pasara

Interesting.
I look forward to the next chapter, and not a preview.

Does Wally speak Japanese?