I bet that Whitestorm hides behind a rock while having an emotional mentalbreakdown every once in a while, just so his clan see him as the "calm vibe" type.

You know, the thing is if your Tigerclaw hadn’t tried to kill Bluestar I don’t think I would mind if he became leader. Your Tigerclaw is a lot less villainous than the canon version, whereas your Thistleclaw is a lot more lol. Him and Fireheart aren’t exactly nemesis in this universe, if anything the main conflict is between Bluestar and Thistleclaw even if she doesn’t know it. Anyways I’ve been really enjoying reading this series, you do a great job with all the characters

I am going to rip Thistleclaw, limp from limp

FINALLY HE KNOWS. My heart hurts so much

WHY FIREHEART WHY DID YOU LISTEN TO THAT SONG OF A HALF TROLL WHYYYYY

yup Fireheart is still a complete idiot

(I know that I'm VERY behind because you are already on the next book but hey) IT'S ABOUT TIME FIREHEART! it took him long enough to figure it out how will this go now and how will the clan react to the truth about him

Oh this story was a masterpiece! I read all your works about Warriors a few weeks ago and have been steadily following this series and I can safely say it's amazing. I love every twist and turn that this story took, especially Thistleclaw's reimplementation into the narrative. I really hope Fireheart gets to meet Thrushpelt soon, the boy need his father to knock some sense into him! Fireheart always struck me as the type of cat to be bullheaded and I think you've perfectly show how dumb and gullible he can be. Bluestar will have her day in the sun though, and hopefully Fireheart can meet his three older siblings as well. Keep up the great work!

Fireheart PLEASE talk to your mother!
So now he's deputy and considering talking to Bluestar, will Thistleclaw make a reappearance?
Your writing is so amazing and I can't wait to see what comes next!

Fireheart the foxheart still hasn't redeemed himself. But, because of that last line, I will give him one last chapter. But, because you said a FOOLISH part of him wanted that, I will give him ONE last chapter, no more than that. Tread carefully, Fireheart the foxheart. The might of MoonClan is watching you walk and one slip and you could greet Thistleclaw a lot sooner than you expected.

Forever Murderous-To-Fireheart-The-Foxheart, The MoonClanner

Fireheart stop telling your self to hate people. And stop breaking people's bones! I'm glad Darkstripe left, he was just a background character for the space of the next two books. Can't wait until next time!

Have to compliment you on your fast updates, just love that. As for the story itself, it's going differently than what I thought would happen. Love it, makes it more surprising when I read your chapters, and of course the tension building between Fireheart and Bluestar over the truth was done very well. I am eager to see what will come next.

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wait so when will fireheart love Bluestar before it's too late?

That is it! Fireheart the foxheart SUCKS, and I HATE him and he can go die in a BADGER DEN! He is worse than an ADDER! I cannot tolerate this anymore! Fireheart the foxheart, I will give you one last chapter to stop me from killing you. If you stay lower than a snake, I will find you and kill you. Consider it EXTRA MOTIVATION! And Bluestar! I love you, your to good for Fireheart the foxheart and at the next gathering, tell the clans the truth of Tigerclaw of you will regret it a lot. Please don't go in an emotionless shell where you given up on StarClan. I love you, and Snowfur is still with you, Oakheart is still with you, Thrushpelt is still with you, Mosskit is still with you, and Moonflower is still with you and Hawkheart is in the Dark Forest because he deserves to be. Along with Clear Sky/Skystar.

Forever Wanting-To-Kill-A-Lot-Of-Warrior-Cats-Because-They-Deserve-It, The MoonClanner

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I love this story so much this one is just as great as the others