I like Crowley teasing/tempting Aziraphale, and also Aziraphales thoughts about Crowley offering a part of himself with the apple...
Following this concept, I really want to know: what will happen when Aziraphale accepts?

Ahhhh, this. Indeed, oldest trick in the book, and source of so many problems, so I love the symbolism here. And it all feels so real; I can picture this scene happening so clearly; the pair of them using these exact words... so good.
Thank you for writing this!

This is one of the sweetest things I've ever read! The apple seems like a double edge sword for Crowley and Aziraphale's relationship. If he takes the apple there's no guarantee that there will be another. But then again there is no guarantee there won't be either. Crowley on the other hand is just being the demon he's always been. He does seem to care for Aziraphale very much. Also I think it's so cute how he tries to help Aziraphale do his crossword puzzle. I really enjoyed the ending though. Even though Crowley leaves it's put out there that he's going to come back. Him and his apples. I wonder what Aziaphale's answer will be the next time? All in all this story was amazing! Keep up the good work, Jet!

Cool story, and it so my type, love it 3 3
Would you mind if i translate this into Vietnamese, so more people can read it? Because GO fic in Vietnamese is quite little.
Thank you very much. 3 3

Honesty is needed there. They need to write it all out and trade pages. At least they would know then.
Cool story. Great symbolism.

Dudo que ese dia llegue, pues Aziraphale teme perderlo por ese simple acto.