Love your story keep writing and is the dragon a catastrophic quaken?
(Don’t mind the fake name I gave myself)

Is the dragon a catastrophic quaken

I'm very pleased with how well thought out and relatable this new chapter was. You're doing great in building up the story's premise and characters, and I really appreciate that. You're growing as a writer. I hope that you continue to expand on that skill.

chapter 8 is same chapter 7

it is a very good chapter and hope you do more soon. Keep up the good work and well will just wait till you update. Homework what a drag. Just do what you can when you can.

Astrid's point of view was most definitely well done. I found it to be incredibly fascinating, and it certainly doesn't leave out the other characters. Your inner dragon must be on . ️

nice little chapter. It's quick and cute. Very nice. hope for more soon.

It's normal, you know, writing block. It happens. Good chapter by the way.

love it!

Great interaction between Stoick and Astrid. I loved it in this new chapter.

writer block is good for no one but we all get it once in a while but its nice to see your improving your writing. keep it up and you'll push through!

Looks good, please continue.

This is a story that I'll definitely be tuning in to. I'm glad I read the first 2 chapters.

could you try and make the chapters a bit longer? And Maybe in the first chapter, you shouldn't have crammed so much in one paragraph as it made it very hard to read and not make a lot of sense. It seems good but you can do better.

Try making it a little longer and add some more details and some more actions and speech. But it's good but could be better if you push yourself harder.

Quite short but still nice. And you wrote cant instead of can't there when gobber was sassing spitelout. I don't mind everybody makes mistakes.