Reviews for Control
Guest chapter 2 . 6/1
This story is so raw, and u can feel all the emotions that sakura and minato face. minatos desperation/ highkey obsession with sakura, the sad unrequitted ish love (one sided)... such vivid and beautiful writing that makes u feel what the characters are feeling & facing,,,

Btw pls ignore the reviews that blatantly and very rudely ignore your request to not demand/ ask for updates,, idg those reviewers like yall can clearly read so why not respect the authors wishes? Lol all those entitled mini karens
unknow98 chapter 2 . 5/31
Can you please continue this story ?
DistanceIsKey chapter 2 . 5/29
Ok I'm obsessed now. What's gonna happen? lol this is so interesting because other time travel minasaku fics usually go by the standard order where sakura got her chance to save the world, go back in time, fall in love, and focus on what's happening there, but in this, you actually explore the "what's next" aspects of it all and I'm LIVING FOR IT.

you're right, as much as I love yandere minato, this is kinda heartbreaking. lol.

I know it's been months, and I hope you're doing well in this these times. if you ever feel inspired again, please come back. I love your writing
liasora chapter 2 . 5/18
Somehow, I really want to read the backstory of Minato and 'Hana'. You should write about it! The snips of their past before her death, left me utterly curious! A worth story to write!
No One chapter 2 . 4/30
Wait! So that's it?! No more action?! With what he had shown I was hoping for this fic to be longer. I really like your writing style. Keep it up. I like Dark!Minato x Sakura do more. Or, you can continue this fic with Minato cotinuously fighting for his love for sakura and hating sasuke and Sasuke being the right ome for sakura. hahahaha just suggestion coz I am really enjoying this storyline hahaha
Guest chapter 2 . 4/18
Wow. I love how dark Minato is. Bring it on. I am cheering for Minato to get withSakura. Yes, in , a person like this is not a good person to be with... But, this is fan fiction baby! I really hope you update soon! I want Minato and Sakura to get together... They of fav couple in Naruto!
Nobody chapter 2 . 4/12
I really like the relationship of sakura with sasuke here. I think it would be better if he ends up with him, though I came here for dark Minato x Sakura, I still think sasuke will be a good endgame for sakura here because it will not be another predictable story. Or you can end her up with Minato but at first non-con them later on stockholm sydrome hahaha
nobody chapter 2 . 4/12
morrreee please! I like it very much!
Sanvilies chapter 1 . 3/29
I'm a sucker for MinaSaku, and while dark!characters can sometimes turn out a bit too messed up for me to enjoy, the way Minato is portrayed is great at being dark! without ending up cringy or triggery. That takes some major clear head and skills. Hope you are OK and can update soon!
darth-sakura chapter 2 . 3/26
I love this
iamkur chapter 2 . 3/13
wooooooooaaaaah... :O
man, don't leave it with suddenly all these opening story left in that chapter.. :P hihi
hope you'll pick this up in the future still

this is really good.
rainboweven chapter 2 . 2/27
Okay, I am seriously enjoying your fic
Guest chapter 1 . 2/10
I understand Minato and his break down... he needs time to digest everything, so he can move on.

Or he can do his best to seduce Sakura, but that is a can of worms that would certainly cause havoc in the village.

By the way, I still don’t think Sasuke is good enough for Sakura. They just don’t fit together. End of story.
EriesAston chapter 2 . 1/18
I love this story! I think sakura is using her old feelings for sasuke as a shield against minato. Minato is a married man and she is hiding behind sasuke to spare herself the pain of being a future mistress..oohhh, i cannot wait for the next chapter...
Davee chapter 2 . 1/13
Woah. Love this pairing. Poor Minato...
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