Reviews for Felix Fortuna
Caver Floyd chapter 12 . 7/24
Good story. I’ve always liked Contessa. I wonder if Dumbledore will be immediately notified when the curse breaks and start investigating or not.
person chapter 12 . 5/1
Are you ever going to post chapters two and three of "Martial Artist Miko in the Land of Fantasy"?
You said you had those ready in space battles four years ago but you never did anything is that fic dead?
Guest chapter 4 . 4/2
I want to know if I have an Obliviation on me.

Fog.

Have no idea what that meant, your are being too vague with answers to her queries, when you bother answering them at all.
Guest chapter 3 . 4/2
It is often confusing when she asks a whole bunch of questions, but we then don't get the answers directly.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/2
"Goodbye, Contessa"
Since she calls him Kurt, wouldn't he call her Fortuna at this point?
typo chapter 12 . 4/2
Minverva - Minerva
LordLewsTherin chapter 12 . 4/3
I have really enjoyed this story. I love the concept, and look forward to more. Thanks for writing this!
Ibskib chapter 1 . 4/2
It might be a good idea to explain to the reader beforehand who Jeanne is.
I'm guessing it's Citrine? Since she gets referred to later on, but it isn't really explained at all.

It's not really a good idea to mention someone multiple times without establishing who they actually are, preferably at the first mention to avoid the kind of confusion (or pause in the reading flow from stopping and googling a name) that can break the immersion.
FreeTraderBeowolf chapter 12 . 4/1
Bit by bit, Fortuna's plans are coming together.
Greatazuredragon chapter 12 . 3/31
Nice chapter, I loved her using the Path to determine the cutest cat. ;p
JanessaVR chapter 12 . 3/30
A new chapter! Thank you so much! And she's making progress. I'll enjoy seeing what the results are for destroying the anchor for the curse on the Defense position - if she *can* destroy a horcrux with no other tools in the middle of the night.
Guest chapter 11 . 3/18
Worm harryshit weebb
JanessaVR chapter 11 . 3/11
Thank you very much for this story! Contessa definitely doesn't get enough love in fanfics, and I regard her as the *true* hero of Worm. Please say that this story will continue?
GlassGirlCeci chapter 11 . 3/9
GAAAAHHHHHHH finally reading this update, it was amazing as always! God bless spring break, or more like spring breakdown-from-trying-to-catch-up-on-all-the-shit-you're-behind-on! But anyway! This onnly have 71 reviews which is a crime so let's fix that. I continue to love the characters so so so much. the interaction with Lupin in the beginning is a perfect example - Flavia and Fortuna being adorable, acting exactly like bright children trying to get one over on an adult and the adult not quite buying it lmao, and lupin being kind and worried yet firm and just - his writing is perfect and reminds me why i love lupin so much. I love how fortuna jumped to her friend's side with hardly a thought :3
And Ophelia, ughhhhhh, so good. Poor Flavia T_T
The introducing paragraphs are so vivid and stark, with flavia's reaction, and then - "Flavia left without saying goodbye." :( It's so good! the whole conversation was perfectly heart-wrenching - fortuna's shut down of ophelia was HIGHLY satisfyiing though lol

But anyway ghhh I can't pull out every little detail, but just, every single chapter I savor the little touches and character moments. The whole dumbledore conversation was ridiculous and great lol. oh, fortuna. i really like how you wrote him though! she had to put in effort and make compromises in order to fool him, and im so glad to not have Master Manipulator Greater Good Dumbledore (though of course i never thought you would do that lol). once again, her power was brilliantly used to give us his perspective. it continues to be such a - always engaging, always purposeful and intriguing. the peek into how he thinks was great! I love how it was described, not nefarious, just, as someone very intelligent and in a position of power, he keeps track of things and thinks about a lot etc etc. theres always the possibbility that she didn't ask all the right questions and missed something but for now the dumbledore issue is resolved lol. but can you imagine if she is ever in a position to interact with him in the presence of flavia and forced to put on this act again? lmao. god damn though, i feel sorry for losing that precious artifact :

but yeah! sorry, extremely disorganized ramble but i had to review before i forgot! thank you so much for writing and i ever so much look forward to the next one!

Also since ostensibly this is a review, HI PEOPLE LOOKING THROUGH THE REVIEWS, PLEASE READ THIS STORY ITS AMAZINGLY WRITTEN AND MAKES YOU FEEL MANY THINGS

btw I wish FFN didn't delete repeated exclamation marks.
Wiwerse chapter 11 . 3/2
hopefully this will continue being updated
i may not have read Worm, but it is still a fascinating universe
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