Id think that Jaune should be a Bunny Hollow, not only would it be hilarious, it would make everyone underestimate his power. And I disagree with the Wolf Hollow idea because Starkk and Lilynette already are the Vasto Lorde version of a Wolf. As a Bunny Hollow, he would have incredibly short burst speeds as if he was hopping for example..now imagine that with the fact he could stand on solid air like any other Hollow or Shinigami.. that'd be a terror in and of itself since he could confuse the enemy so easily because they can't see him. And then there's the fact at such high speeds, he would have extremely high impact power. and since Bunny's are speed based, I think anyway, it could be a possibility his Cero charges quicker than most Hollows and Arrancar, except for Starrk's Resurreccion, although it'd be doubtful. Just a thought. Why not play the the Underdog after all, who's so unassuming, you wouldn't even think the guy was powerful in the least? Also, I don't like the idea of a harem for Jaune..but if it's a necessity..then I vote for Appacci (The Deer Arrancar with a foul mouth) to be in that wonderful Harem. Not the Gorilla of a Lion (another of Halibel's fraccion). Hm..maybe I should get my drawing kit out to try and draw a Rabbit Hollow Jaune...

...isn't the premise for this story a copy of the Asura's Wrath x RWBY crossover? Where Asura (best dad of the Multiverse) was reincarnated as Jaune and only woke up when Jaune died?
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Liking the story so far cant wait to see how it progresses next chapter

How Jaune seemed to never win any of his fights despite being taught by a champion fighter like Pyrrha Nikos.

Maybe Pyrrha was just a shit teacher, champion fighter doesn't necessarily mean competent teacher.

I like how Jaune points out how dumb Pyrrha really was, let's face it she was full of herself and was only untouchable because she had an OP semblance, that practically let her cheat her fights.

Wow, this is already ultra cancer just like the rest of the rag you write.

By the way Yesterday was my birthday and I consider this your gift.

Very good atmosphere and description,.you've really improved. Trough i hope the harem Will consost at most of thrree girls still in his range of power(same for his Friends and enemies) and please, not a Wolf for his hollow form,.some fines or maybe a Dragon. Personal opinion aniway. Good work.

KO awesome chapter, Jaune is about to face Cinder knowing he will not survive this battle but he doesn’t care for as long as he can show everyone her evil and help the world be better prepared for her.

Dear Marka,

When I saw, in fanfiction, the title of “Jaune, Cero Espada”, I was curious about it then became a bit confused when I read the information that you provided.
After reading it, I understand the reasons and I happily await the creation of the story.

There is just a few things that I wish to say.
Now you can ignore what I am going to say but at least hear me out.

You see, as I read the summary you provided, I notice a few things.
1. The fact that Jaune is on the tower to fight Cinder instead of Pyrrha. This is a part that I worry because I believe there is two authors that wrote a similar scenario.
One is Masseffect-TxS in “The Remnant Knight” and another would be Jauneforever in “A Knights Final Fight”.
I worry because I don’t wish it to be a story with parts copy-pasted from other stories.
I know you are a decent author since I read “An Arc Jinchuriki” (a good work and will await its continuation),
however I feel you will need to make it your original writing unique just like the others.

2. The second Point is how are you going to show Jaune in this environment.
You see, you intend for Jaune Arc, the boy that joined Beacon in order help people (genuinely) and uphold his heritage, to be reborn as a Hollow in the Hueco Mundo, the world known for being inhabited by dangerous evil spirits and where they devour each other to satisfy their endless hunger and become stronger?
I believe that you will need to write about his struggles and actions because without them, how could Aizen be interested in him other than recruiting grunts for his army and Jaune be able to become the Cero Espada?
You can’t just have Jaune and Aizen see each other by chance and have Jaune be recruited right of the bat.

3. No bashing. Now I know that you are a capable writer and I mean it. However, while many would feel a certain satisfaction from the humiliation of certain hateful characters (Screw Malty from “the rising of the shield hero”!), I feel that you will need to be flexible for this story. Just like the world of Naruto, Bleach has an history that possess different viewpoints:
- Shinigami and Hollows with the former believing that the latter needs to be put down at all cost due to being evil spirits while the latter despite being driven by an endless hunger can have emotions of their own other than negative one (Halibel caring for her three foster sisters, Stark and Lilynette not wanting to be alone, and Nel being adorable as always!).
-The Shinigamis and other groups they fought against (Quinchies, Bounts, Xcution).
- Soul society and its many wrongs (when I say many, I mean many! I mean half of the problems that Ichigo encountered in his journey were caused by Soul Society directly or indirectly for god sake (I am talking about you, Central 46!)!).
That is why I feel that you need to have development in your story, how characters will react realistically to news and take actions and also how Jaune will change things in small or big waves.

4. And finally, the harem part. Honestly, as long as the story is good, I am not that bothered. But while it doesn’t bother, I don’t wish for it to be most part about Jaune’s love life. There will be wars, not dating sims!
So you will need to develop the relationship of Jaune with his comrades and his ladies. How did he meet them? What is their relationship? How did they end up falling in love? Those sort of things.

And done! I finished talking... oh boy, I didn’t think that it was going to be that long!
I apologise if I was asking so much. It is just the fact that it is going to be the first that someone is going to write an arrancar Jaune story so I couldn’t help but feel excited at the prospect.

Oh, another thing. I wish to suggest about Jaune’s abilities and design as a hollow and for his resurrection form. I would suggest to inspire yourself from the games of Dark souls 1, 2, 3 and code Vein. The bosses have cool designs and I believe that bosses that looked like knights or warriors would fit the bill when it comes for Jaune. Just a suggestion.

Anyway, good luck making it. I can’t wait!

Regards
A guest

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Im still waiting

Been wanting to see a one where Jaune is a hollow. Can’t wait to see how the knight now turned hollow effects the Bleach world. Hope the true chapter comes out when you feel like it’s done.

I will be waiting, my apprentice

I like the idea and support this fic