So, Itachi did not get his Mangekyo when Shisui dies in this one why? I mean, he was still Itachi's closest friend and all that, unless you are changing how that nonsense works. It just seems a bit off to me, especially when an Anbu trained shinobi cannot react despite the circumstances.

Love it dude keep it up

Errr... so how does Kami and the Shinigami fit into this.. grand mythology you've created? Or do they?

Unless Akeno only has one (and it seems she does not) her breasts should always be plural unless you are writing about just one of them. You've make note of her boobs quite OFTEN so far, so I figured I'd mention this. Honestly, they way you go on she must have a rack to rival Tsunade LOL.

So Mikoto has a hard on for Arashi? Cute. The minute she makes any kind of move his wife will axe murder her.

I am laughing so hard right now. How is drowning yourself in a toilet supposed to be passed off as an accident?

Well, Naruto took the news well. I know several adults who did not act that mature when they found out they were adopted...

Hmmm first day of academy. Yep Naruto and Kiba will be at each other hammer and tongs to prove who is better. As for Naruto's crow...Nero is an odd name for a female crow. Plus, having a familiar/animal sidekick isn't the same as having a summon contract is it? I can't see Jiraiya NOT wanting Naruto to sign the Toad Contract...

NXFH love
Again the cliffhanger... was expecting a kiss at the end... but I guess it'd be too much to ask for this early ... kinda really sad... they'll have to fight... I don't get why he didjt go find gato n kill him directly... but I guess well all upto you... looking forward to see how it'll go
thank you for the update... loved haruhaku looking forward to more fluff...till next time...
take care stay safe!

Hi there

The orange eyes, the voice, it seems that his powers are getting stronger by the minute, but I get the feeling the voice is not someone to be trifled with...

Anyway, keep up the great writing and stay safe!

When Izuku makes a guest appearance to summon Despair lol

great chapter i like how your not sticking to cannon and having gato do other things than just leave it till zabuza battles them then ambushes them looking forward to naruto and hakus fight cant wait to see how that pans out and how he will save her

Great chapter Brodie, there are some parts where you have Naruto’s name as Izuku but its a honest mistake. Other than couple mistakes it was a lovely chapter filled with some angst and fluff. Gotta love it

Black clover, harry potter, soul eater you are pulling from a lot of different series but what was with the random izuku mention in this chapter?

Lol I am that friend I won’t lie I’m an add hole sometimes

I think you could have worded that different mother to his nephew sounds like she cheated on him maybe mother of his adopted son

An outstanding story. Thank you so much!

Super tare povestea