Reviews for Carrot
morbus-rus chapter 2 . 8/20
This... This actually works, dynamic between them is amusing and extremely cute.
FanFicFan50 chapter 2 . 6/5
Too bad this did not end romantically but I like the part there where he decapitated and Ursa Major while humming the tune "Geistbusters" Anyway tho I enjoyed it the whole way through.
The Mexican Taco Overlord chapter 2 . 6/1
This is wholesome as fuck bro. I love it.
CultCorvidae chapter 2 . 4/25
I'm losing any faith that you'll update this after looking over your other work. Your pattern seems to be going a few chapters into a story, moving on to the next, and never giving the courtesy of admitting your no longer going to update it.
Abyss Trinity chapter 2 . 4/19
I'm now own the jaune and nora train :)
decodelifehacker chapter 2 . 4/17
can't wait for the next episode
A UMD Disk chapter 2 . 4/4
With how genuine and sincere Nora is here in her insanity, I think it'd be hard not to smile while writing this. What I appreciate is that even with her mind high off the smell of pancakes and her usual intensity, you haven't forgotten her empathy for others, which is something I feel gets left behind with characters like these and their wacky hijinks.

The two's not-date date was cute, also. Their competition is great, and it's nice to see it remain fun despite each trying to one-up the other. Jaune's early attempts to bore her into submission and Nora setting him up for detention were a cool kickoff. The hugs were nice too. Really, at this point, I think it's become their way of flirting, even if they don't know it. It was nice to see team RWBY react to them, same with Ren being pleased with how much Nora is enjoying herself.

I like this, like the Nora's Arc, like the bits of lewd. It's good.
Draco711 chapter 2 . 3/1
When is the next chapter?
FadilShameer chapter 2 . 2/4
Awwwww this is great please update soon!
CrowV4 chapter 2 . 1/8
The writing is practically perfect. Good work, you managed to get to the level of "absorbed in the story". Maybe it might have worked better if it was an AU where they are in University, but probably not.
I await eagerly for Jaune to man up and give Nora a taste of the Arc Romance Technique.
A Fan chapter 2 . 12/18/2019
I fear that if I read another chapter I will die from diabetes. But the worrying part is that I don't think I'd mind it.
Guest chapter 2 . 12/13/2019
update pls :(
NugiSpringield chapter 1 . 12/12/2019
You keep doing this to me. You're a monster. We need more. We demand more. Nora's Arc.
decodelifehacker chapter 2 . 11/18/2019
I'm trying to imagine a wiess and blake version of this. also is honey part of this...series I guess you would call it.
Snappy Flowah chapter 2 . 10/27/2019
Eurgh!
*choking noises*
Gah!
*clutches chest*
My heart!

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!.!.!.!.!.!
CX
My goodness, this is so sugary-sweet. It's like, diabetes-inducing sweetness with fluffy cherry on top.
I can't get enough! I need MOAHHH!.!.!

...

IT'S TOO MUCH!

I'M DROWNING IN THE SYRUPY GOODNESS!

PLEASE HALP MEEEEEE!.!.!
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