Dude.. I seriously like time travel fics, GOT / ASOIAF fics, but this.. This is just.. I can not find words to describe this "thing". Sorry for the harsh words, but you really need a beta (but I think if I would have to proofread something like this, I would pull all my hairs out, and I would give up reading for EVER).
Just an example from your newest chapter:
"... just like her older brother VISIALIA."
Now as a Hungarian guy, who basically learned English here, I can understand some misspelling, but just who the f**k is VISIALIA? Ahh you mean VISERYS... You don't have to be a grammar-prodigy to spell names correctly, you just have to read the books, or god forbid, if you are not sure about an "I" or "Y", just check it literally ANYWHERE (Google is your friend).
That said, the concept is good, but sorry, I can't read it at all.. At least until you have a competent beta.

Awesome work as always! Not a massive game of thrones fan but I really like this.

Awesome work as always. Keep it up

Wow! Catching up on a couple of chapters and loving how you are merging existing into this new timeline. Can’t wait to read more!

This is a really great story and quite well written, and I'm loving the character development, but please for the love of The Old Gods change Measter to Maester

Pretty much every "where" is were, "pourer" is poorer, "confuse" is confess.

I love

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Great chapter! Love this story! Stay safe and well!

Amazing chapter as usual.

wow this was interesting what is little finger up to i cant wait for the next chapter

The story is good, however you as a writer haven't improved at all. You refuse to improve despite constructive criticism, if I was writing I'd be sure to learn about writing tehniques and everything authors need to know. I can't respect you as you make basic grammar mistakes over and over again, write redundant sentences and sometimes even factoid paragraphs which seem to be written by an elementary schooler : This happened then that happened then that but...however...
Honestly I've read a fic with better grammar from a dyslexic author. Honestly if you're told woman/man is singular, women/men plural, difference between than and then, your and you're, seems and seams and so on... and you still keep making those mistakes, that just makes you a stubborn moron.

Wtf is with your grammar, haven't you improved after all this writing or taken a proofreader?

I miss this story. I hope you are well and healthy. Stay safe!

I love this story! I hope you’re healthy and well and enjoying the summer!