Reviews for A Much Needed Vacation |
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mandapandabug chapter 13 . 5/20 wow I really liked this story! It's so cute and makes me wish it were summer haha. I would like them to speak English more. I think that was a nice connection. Also I'm really impressed by your writing style. I didn't notice any typos tho I wasn't on the hunt or anything haha. It's a good story. I hope you keep it up! I'll be waiting for more. Review you later _ |
Guest chapter 13 . 4/25 Hope to read more soon! |
Guest chapter 13 . 12/10/2019 Hope to read more after the holidays! |
Stormglass chapter 13 . 11/20/2019 Oh my gosh this is amazing I love it! I really hope you continue it! XD |
AppleCiderr chapter 13 . 10/10/2019 Ooh! Kaiba’s getting a little curious! I love how in character these guys are and somehow the character development is still there :) Best birthday present! |
serena.jones.585 chapter 13 . 10/8/2019 Poor Seto. I don't think he realizes how much trouble he's in! |
Guest chapter 12 . 9/30/2019 i hope you aren't being hit with writer's block! |
serena.jones.585 chapter 12 . 9/8/2019 Oops, watch out, Kaiba! Your caring is showing. You might want to hide that a bit more. |
AppleCiderr chapter 12 . 9/8/2019 Whether he knows it or not, Seto is really starting to care about Jou! Really enjoyed this chapter! Seeing Seto be kind enough to help Jou and a hint of what Jou is going through was interesting and well written as always! |
AppleCiderr chapter 11 . 8/31/2019 Aww! Slowly but surely, Seto and Jou are getting along better! |
serena.jones.585 chapter 11 . 8/31/2019 Aw man! Now I want steak for dinner. |
AppleCiderr chapter 1 . 8/27/2019 I started reading this on Deviantart and once I saw it here I couldn’t believe it was you! How did I not recognize your writing style sooner? I’ve reread Co-app Gaming and The Older Brother so many times, I should have realized it much quicker. As usual with your stories, this one is a work of art! I enjoy how you always manage to keep the characters personalities and have a slow build up throughout the story that doesn’t feel like it’s going too fast or dragging on far too slow. I enjoy to see where this one goes next! |
MistressArafaxdeep chapter 9 . 8/25/2019 This is just so so cute. I love the more relaxed, vacation mode Kaiba, and Jou's complete surprise about it. They've been getting along so well. I hope it continues. Thanks so much for a new chapter! |
serena.jones.585 chapter 10 . 8/25/2019 Seto isn't simply brotherly, he's paternal. Thank you for that. And Jou, while it's perfect here, red and black might be a bit too flashy for most job interviews. Just saying, y'know? |
serena.jones.585 chapter 9 . 8/18/2019 I love Mokuba. I absolutely love that boy. |