Reviews for Green Haired Greek In Brockton Bay (Worm CYOA v3)
Based d20 chapter 16 . 4/29
You're Back! Good to see this fic updated. Cant wait to see more
DivineWhiskey chapter 2 . 4/13
Easily my favorite fan fiction, it’s a shame that the author doesn’t update it. No one gives love to Achilles :(
Rawrking chapter 1 . 10/17/2019
blergh
xenoblubber chapter 3 . 8/22/2019
So far this isn't looking very promising. The rapidly changing POV, horribly fast and frantic story pacing, bad chapter lengths that cut off without even finishing a single scene, characters are way to accepting and flat, and the 'rule of cool' fight scenes that don't make any sense.

Seriously, if the MC is moving so fast, then why does Lung have so much time to speak a sentence and then put his arms up in a blocking motion? And why are you having the MC use brute force to win against Lung when that would just make his shard escalate his power level, it wouldn't work.

I really hope this gets better.
006Sam chapter 2 . 8/14/2019
gay
Ivan Tridelan chapter 16 . 8/12/2019
Good story so far. About your questions at the end:
1) No clue
2) All I know is it starts up shortly after the Simurgh hits Canberra (which I think was December). I do hope you do something about that. Poor Paige gets her 6th Amendment rights violated on NATIONAL TV and nobody calls the court out on that. And from the sound of it, the defense attorney doesn't even try to defend her, which is a mistrial in itself
3) I'm assuming Coil never gets his hands on her then, because he can then infinitely retry that one question. Personally, I'd go with something like "result not found". Alternatively, it could work fine, BECAUSE HE WANTS IT TO as opposed to someone like Contessa being told "NOPE" because he doesn't want Cauldron trying to control him
YeTianshi chapter 16 . 8/10/2019
Nice chapter, so are Dinah's parents going to try and contact Rider or is he going to take initiative instead? Makes me wonder if they'll take the threat of Coil seriously.

I know Canary was arrested in 2010, but I don't think there is an actual canon date for her trial or anything. Considering how she was railroaded though, I don't think there was a significant time gap between her arrest and her incarceration. I'm not even sure if she's not already in the birdcage by the time Taylor takes on Lung.
PasiveNox chapter 16 . 8/10/2019
great great
PasiveNox chapter 15 . 8/10/2019
yeah great
superpierce chapter 16 . 8/10/2019
it doesn't really make sense for Dinah's power to be able to work through man of mystery it sounds like a stretch of it being possible.
osterreicher97 chapter 16 . 8/10/2019
Well, Dinah's power was the one that helped determine the timeline for Golden Morning if I recall correctly. Coil's power is very easy to disrupt or mess with, and Contessa's PTV is basically a step by step guidance system. Man of Mystery would definitely screw with Coil's simulation based power along with Tattletale's intuition/ microexpressions since their's is a bit more directly focused than Dinah's.
Suzululu4moe chapter 16 . 8/10/2019
It seems he’s not letting Taylor have any experience at all.
verycoolname chapter 16 . 8/10/2019
Every time I start reading Worm fanfics I always reach that point where I realize how MUCH bad shit there is for the MC(s) to deal with. It's less, 'I hope Canary and Dinah don't have to deal with the shit they did in canon, and more, 'I hope shitty events 4 through 749* don't happen.'

*(I haven't actually counted but that sounds about right. Wildbow is an amazing writer, but seriously...)
superpierce chapter 15 . 8/10/2019
Greg Veder being right online for once hopefully the world isn't ending.
apostlelord chapter 16 . 8/10/2019
nice chapter
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