Nice job, keep up the good work and update as soon as you possibly can. I would also like to ask if Emily can join Ash and friends on their journey through Kalos and Alola as well. I would also like to thank you for what you are doing for my OC Emily, and also apologize for my constant rantings from time to time—but I can’t always help it as a fan girl I tend to go overboard quite often, and I hope that you will forgive this sort of attitude of mine...

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Some wording seems off, but it's an interesting start.

On another note, there's a fan theory that Bruno may be Ash's dad.

Ash is Arceus

Dialga, palkia, and Giratina

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Nice Job! Keep up the good work. Now I have a few things I want to say.
First of all I did give you the (possible) Shipping Name for Serena and Gladion—however in this story I’m hoping to see Amourshipping ver. 2 (which is your shipping name for Serena x Mark) of course I’m hoping to see that because Gladion and Emily are together.
Now I’ve got a new question now; since Emily has an eevee will it remain an eevee or will it evolve into one of the eevee-lutions (eevee evolutions) and if it does evolve I cannot wait to see which one it will evolve into.
I apologize for rambling. I hope you have a good day, bye!

Nice Job keep up the good work.
Though I am curious when will Ash and Lillie’s other companions get a chance to catch some Sinnoh pokemon; I’d like to see what happens...
And for your story A New Ash Ketchum; the shipping name for Serena x Gladion is Classyrebelshipping (at least that’s what I know—from the internet anyways.) have a good day and update as soon as possibly can.

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